Post by blaggers on Aug 24, 2008 12:37:27 GMT -5
The Mad City
Pilot
Christopher Walken - Death
Rainn Wilson - Doc Danger
Malcom McDowell - Daniel D.D.
Doug Jones - O Eye
Nestor Carbonell - The Goode
Patrick Warburton - Martin Q. Ronald
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-A Warehouse on the dock: big, fading red paint glistens off the moon light as black figures walk into it. The Warehouse is empty, only gray pavement makes a color notice but it’s not that much. A figure in a blue suit and dark red tie walks up to a figure dressed at what appears to be a ninja. The figure has thick red hair and brown eyes, wrinkly skin: looks to be in his 50s although his figure is tall and well in shape. The ninja figure has several over soldiers behind him, each holding a shotgun. Behind the blue suit is a group of blonde headed, blue eyed buff men wearing dark green trench-coats with some weapon behind them. The blue suit called “Death”, his a thick German accent-
Death-
Show me it.
-The Ninja hands him a briefcase. Death opens it-
Death-
Hmm…. You’re a trust-worthy man, I’ll give you 900 upfront…
-The Ninja, called “Doc Danger” speaks in a fast past tone-
Doc Danger-
Look, I went to the effort to give you something you could really sneak your teeth into, this isn’t easy to come across and when you do, you have to kill at least 10 men to get it, I killed 100.
Death-
I said, I’ll give you 900 upfront and if this is as good as you say… I’ll give 9000 after.
Doc Danger-
1800, NOW!
Death-
I’m not new to this, I’ve been around longer then you. I know the difference between a raw deal and a good deal-
Doc Danger-
-Are you implying this is a raw deal?
Death-
No. I’ll give you 1200 now, 9000 later, okay?
Doc Danger-
No. 1900. Now.
Death-
Look, I’m not in the mood to-
-Doc Danger pulls out a gun and points it right at Death’s head-
Doc Danger-
1900 or put a bullet in your thick skull.
Death-
Your making a BIG mistake!
Doc Danger-
You shouldn’t cross a man who only accepts respect.
Death-
And you shouldn’t have grossed a man who’s had his skull replaced with a bullet proof material!
-Death grabs Doc Danger’s arm, twists it around and begins to shot at a few of Doc’s body-guards. The leap up into the air and begin to aim at Death’s bodyguards who pull out machetes. They toss the blades into the air: one fits a guard and goes straight through his chest, the solider drops to the ground dead while the others stay up in the air continuing to fire. Doc punches Death in the face and gains control of his hand back. Doc Danger puts on the gun of Death’s balls-
Doc Danger-
Did you have those replaced as well?
Death-
No, put I had this!
-Death knees Doc in the chest, Doc falls to the ground for a second. A blade sticks out of Death’s knee. He smacks his feet together and it disappears. Death begins to kick Doc in the face while his soldiers are begin killed-
Death-
YOU! BETTER! LEARN! WHO! IS! THE KING!
-Death commits one last brutal kick to the neck-
Death-
Here’s some for the effort!
-Death throws down 2000. Cut to the skyline. The sky is tinted dark blue as fog begins to rise from the rooftops. “The Goode” rises from a building: black jump suit with a giant “G” on his chest in red, thick black hair and a well built body, a black thin line goes past his eyes to make a mask. The Goode’s eyes are blinding white-
The Goode- (VO)
The pot I received from Ricky begins to wear off as I begin my 10 o’clock route: from The Candy Street…
-Zoom down to the street which is full of women talking to men and others getting in their cars-
The Goode- (VO)
To The “Race War” Street…
-Zoom down to a skinny white kid talking to a bunch of big buff black men, they start to slam him on the ground and kick him-
The Goode- (VO)
God, I love this City. For every dozen amoral citizens, there is one good one and we luckily have him as the head of the police. Enter Daniel D.D.
--BREAK--
NARRATOR
This summer....
Nikko and Terrence sit in a science class.
NARRATOR
All will be revealed.
TERRENCE
We have the mile today.
NIKKO
Are you serious?
TERRENCE
Yes!
NIKKO
This is not good. This is the worst possible thing that could happen.
QUICK CUTS:
-CRAZY DUDE shoots at him with his Machine gun
- Terrence kicks a kickball into a little kid's face.
-Nikko pets a dog that falls over and dies.
NIKKO
You know what? This day turned out a lot better than I expected. I didn't have to run the mile.
We PAN BACK to reveal the Crazy Dude pointing a shotgun at them.
TERRENCE
Like this is so much better.
TERRENCE AND NIKKO RUN THE MILE
TERRENCE
Idiot.
COMING FRIDAY, AUGUST 29th, 2008
--BREAK---
-The office of Daniel D.D., he has short white hair and wrinkly skin. Daniel D.D. writes some notes down on begins to strap on a bullet proof vest. He opens his blindfolds from his 5th story office in the Police Station. Daniel turns around to see The Goode-
Daniel D.D.-
The Goode, it’s… good to see you here.
The Goode- (VO)
This man is honest and one hell of a cop. His arrest record would put Hitler’s murder record to shame. The man has arrested just about everyone in this damned city but The Judges are given some zing to keep the crooks on the streets. If the city runs wild then the big cats can better control it to there advantage.
Daniel D.D.-
We got some reports from the docks.
The Goode-
Yeah… what did you get?
Daniel D.D.-
Appears that Doc Danger and Death had a deal gone wrong, about 7 corpses.
The Goode-
Death kill any of them?
Daniel D.D.-
Don’t be silly…
-Daniel D.D. grabs a handgun and loads it-
Daniel D.D.-
… Death doesn’t kill anyone.
-The Goode pulls out a stick of gum and begins to chew it-
The Goode- (VO)
Winter-fresh. Helps me relax.
Daniel D.D.-
He’s too much of a gent to kill someone. He’d have someone do it for him.
The Goode-
Any way to get him for it?
Daniel D.D.-
Are you kidding? There’s no way I could lay a finger on him. If I could get the perfect evidence, it’d just end up be a waist, he’d pay the whole damn court to be quiet.
The Goode-
What do we do?
Daniel D.D.-
Goode, I can’t go on like this. This is bullshit.
The Goode-
Suggestions?
Daniel D.D.-
Where not playing by the law anymore.
The Goode-
It’s about time.
Daniel D.D.-
I’m ready to walk into Death’s office and kill him myself.
The Goode-
Why not?
Daniel D.D.-
Because if I fail, then I’ll have to go to court and he’ll pay the Judge to make sure I can the longest sentence ever thought of.
The Goode-
Well…
Daniel D.D.-
That’s why you’re going to do it.
The Goode-
Really now?
Daniel D.D.-
He can get me easily. But as for you, not so much.
The Goode-
Interesting.
Daniel D.D.-
I’ll let you go without rules.
The Goode-
About time.
-The Goode begins to walk toward a window-
Daniel D.D.-
But… you have to remain cool and only kill the bad guys.
The Goode-
Is there any other kind of person in this city?
-The Goode jumps out of the window-
Daniel D.D.-
Good point.
-Cut to a tall tower in the middle of a rotten neighborhood. Death looks outside his window to see bits of snow falling-
Death-
Gentlemen… “tis the season”. The first snow falls like an angel from Heaven. We need to secure are… “reputation” as the good family in this city. That’s why tomorrow, at midnight, where going to pour 100,000 onto this city.
-The camera spins to reveal a long table full of different men wearing nice suits, the youngest seems to be in his mid 30s, the oldest in his late 80s. There “The Rain Men”. A group of men who own different “districts” in the city. Most own a street or two but there is 5 main “fat cats” (gang leaders): Death and Doc Danger are two of them-
Death-
Resident Jacko…
-Cut to Resident Jacko: he has dark skin, light blue eyes and thin long hair wearing a blue suit, a very nice one at that with a bright orange tie-
Death-
… what do you think of this… humble act?
Resident Jacko-
I think you’re a jackass for inviting us all here.
Death-
Yes, I know we have never truly gotten along but we have to show the public that we aren’t greedy men.
Resident Jacko-
I’d like to respect you. I’d really like to respect you a lot but this idea was childish and too be honest… I’d rather go back to us minding are own business.
Death-
Well, I guess you don’t want to give a donation?
Resident Jacko-
No.
Death-
Well then, O Eye?
-Cut to O Eye. The man is extremely skinny, his pale skin, bald and his eyes are completely black with dark purple circles under his eyes, it seems as if he is naked but no genitals show, probably a skin tight outfit vacuumed unto him. His voice is hollow, almost faint-
O Eye-
What it does with it’s money concerns not O Eye, not at all.
Death-
Predictable.
O Eye-
If my response was predictable to your question, then why does it still ask said question?
Death-
Sorry to waste my energy. Where’s Martin Q. Ronald?
--BREAK--
"In the way of Clerks and several other films similar, good dialogue and characters go a long way"-y2gatti
-Danif drives in his car while on the phone with Zack-
Danif Rap-
Hello?
"Like a mix of Superbad and Clerks"- BlackSuit_CrimeBoss
Danif Rap-
What’s up?
-Danif pulls in Zack’s front yard. He has a green “1 Up” shirt on and Iron Man boxers. He runs up to Danif’s window-
Danif Rap-
Where’s your pants?
-Cut to The Maul’s Mall. Zack and Danif walk into it. Cut to them in “The Comic Shop”. Zack hits the lights and Danif grabs a box of comics and begins to open them. He puts them on shelves. Zack goes into a back room and is now wearing black shorts-
Danif Rap-
Well look at you, wearing pants… like a normal person, I better call your mom and tell the good news.
"If Clerks and Mallrats had a baby and Xplay raised it, this is it"- Batman
-Jane Willow walks in with a “I Believe in Harvey Dent” shirt, blue jeans, a green and brown striped mini-skirt over it and her hair pulled back-
Jane Willow-
My mother sold all of her Barbies, in mint condition to pay my way to college.
Zack Woody-
Yea, put it’s not like college really matters. Besides, you still got another week until school’s out and then you get a whole summer till college starts, nothing to worry about.
-Cut to Zack in the room alone with Jesus-
"Go see it"- SCF Films
Jesus Christ-
Hay, hay, hay, hay!
Zack Woody-
JESUS CHRIST!
Jesus Christ-
Not so loud man, I don’t want them to know I’m here.
Zack Woody-
Who are they?
Jesus Christ-
The chicks, I’m like… The Beatles or something.
The Comic Shop
Out Now
Rated R
--BREAK--
-Cut to a pure white bathroom. A muscled up man with gold hair lays in the tub while looking at the mirror at himself. This is Martin Q. Ronald-
The Goode- (VO)
Martin Q. Ronald was at the bottom of the gang leaders. He never went to the meetings because he figured it wouldn’t affect him. Martin had four guards out of his bathtub. He has a self-obsession, watching his own every move. Martin has a sister named Jennifer Ronald who is the real head of the gang, she knows he couldn’t run a gang to save his life but he makes for a good public image. I’ll deal with her some other way later, something more “classy”. But first, I want to see if this man has as much as muscle as he claims.
-A window near the entrance of the door breaks open and The Goode is revealed, he quickly locks the door-
Martin Q. Ronald-
The Goode, what in god’s name are you doing here?
The Goode-
Needed to check and see if you needed help wiping your ass.
Martin Q. Ronald-
You little piece of shit…
-Martin Q. Ronald rises from the tub-
Martin Q. Ronald-
I’m gonna give you the ass whipping you deserve!
-Martin rushes toward The Goode who begins to stand on his tiptoes. Martin gets closer then The Goode flings his foot straight in this face and the other leg reaches up and bashes him in the stomach, Martin quickly falls to the ground. The Goode jumps on top of Martin, pulls out a knife and puts it too his throat-
The Goode-
I want you to get dressed and go to that meeting, tell them The Goode Is coming for them next…
Martin Q. Ronald-
And if I don’t?
-The Goode pulls out a needle and jams it in Martin’s left butt cheek-
The Goode-
Then I won’t give you the cure.
-The Goode silently disappears into a shadow-
Martin Q. Ronald-
Oh… OH GOD!
-Cut to a rooftop. Daniel D.D. holds a cup of coffee and looks over the city. The Goode arrives-
Daniel D.D.-
How’d it go?
The Goode-
Well. They’ll know that they’ve been targeted.
Daniel D.D.-
It’d be bad press to see us together. The good cop and the mad vigilante.
The Goode-
How many times have I told you? There is no such thing as bad press.
-The Goode jumps off the building. Cut to Martin Q. Ronald walking into the mob meeting, naked-
Death-
Martin… it’s…. nice of you to show your… face…
Martin Q. Ronald-
The Goode is coming.
Death-
What?
Martin Q. Ronald-
The good wants you to know that he’s coming for all of you.
Resident Jacko-
If that freak comes even a foot away from me, I’m ripping his goddamn head off!
Death-
Well, it appears where not all to happy about this…
-Cut to a lousy apartment. A fat brown cat walks around, trash laying everywhere. The Goode comes in from the darkness, naked. He crawls into his bed, there is a woman there also-
The Goode- (VO)
Lucy. Every second on the job I feel sorrow for her. I’m rarely home, off doing this or that. But… she doesn’t leave me. I’ve been telling her that the time will come for The Goode to be useless, no need for him. I’ve been saying that every night for the last 5 years, she wants a child… but I can’t let her have a child in a place like this. This plan, to do it dirty, just go in there and slice there throats… the old me would never do something like that… but this city changes people… for better or worse. But I swear on my soul that the second there all dead and this City can rebuild itself… I’ll throw down the tights, and father a child that Lucy deserves.
Pilot
Christopher Walken - Death
Rainn Wilson - Doc Danger
Malcom McDowell - Daniel D.D.
Doug Jones - O Eye
Nestor Carbonell - The Goode
Patrick Warburton - Martin Q. Ronald
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-A Warehouse on the dock: big, fading red paint glistens off the moon light as black figures walk into it. The Warehouse is empty, only gray pavement makes a color notice but it’s not that much. A figure in a blue suit and dark red tie walks up to a figure dressed at what appears to be a ninja. The figure has thick red hair and brown eyes, wrinkly skin: looks to be in his 50s although his figure is tall and well in shape. The ninja figure has several over soldiers behind him, each holding a shotgun. Behind the blue suit is a group of blonde headed, blue eyed buff men wearing dark green trench-coats with some weapon behind them. The blue suit called “Death”, his a thick German accent-
Death-
Show me it.
-The Ninja hands him a briefcase. Death opens it-
Death-
Hmm…. You’re a trust-worthy man, I’ll give you 900 upfront…
-The Ninja, called “Doc Danger” speaks in a fast past tone-
Doc Danger-
Look, I went to the effort to give you something you could really sneak your teeth into, this isn’t easy to come across and when you do, you have to kill at least 10 men to get it, I killed 100.
Death-
I said, I’ll give you 900 upfront and if this is as good as you say… I’ll give 9000 after.
Doc Danger-
1800, NOW!
Death-
I’m not new to this, I’ve been around longer then you. I know the difference between a raw deal and a good deal-
Doc Danger-
-Are you implying this is a raw deal?
Death-
No. I’ll give you 1200 now, 9000 later, okay?
Doc Danger-
No. 1900. Now.
Death-
Look, I’m not in the mood to-
-Doc Danger pulls out a gun and points it right at Death’s head-
Doc Danger-
1900 or put a bullet in your thick skull.
Death-
Your making a BIG mistake!
Doc Danger-
You shouldn’t cross a man who only accepts respect.
Death-
And you shouldn’t have grossed a man who’s had his skull replaced with a bullet proof material!
-Death grabs Doc Danger’s arm, twists it around and begins to shot at a few of Doc’s body-guards. The leap up into the air and begin to aim at Death’s bodyguards who pull out machetes. They toss the blades into the air: one fits a guard and goes straight through his chest, the solider drops to the ground dead while the others stay up in the air continuing to fire. Doc punches Death in the face and gains control of his hand back. Doc Danger puts on the gun of Death’s balls-
Doc Danger-
Did you have those replaced as well?
Death-
No, put I had this!
-Death knees Doc in the chest, Doc falls to the ground for a second. A blade sticks out of Death’s knee. He smacks his feet together and it disappears. Death begins to kick Doc in the face while his soldiers are begin killed-
Death-
YOU! BETTER! LEARN! WHO! IS! THE KING!
-Death commits one last brutal kick to the neck-
Death-
Here’s some for the effort!
-Death throws down 2000. Cut to the skyline. The sky is tinted dark blue as fog begins to rise from the rooftops. “The Goode” rises from a building: black jump suit with a giant “G” on his chest in red, thick black hair and a well built body, a black thin line goes past his eyes to make a mask. The Goode’s eyes are blinding white-
The Goode- (VO)
The pot I received from Ricky begins to wear off as I begin my 10 o’clock route: from The Candy Street…
-Zoom down to the street which is full of women talking to men and others getting in their cars-
The Goode- (VO)
To The “Race War” Street…
-Zoom down to a skinny white kid talking to a bunch of big buff black men, they start to slam him on the ground and kick him-
The Goode- (VO)
God, I love this City. For every dozen amoral citizens, there is one good one and we luckily have him as the head of the police. Enter Daniel D.D.
--BREAK--
NARRATOR
This summer....
Nikko and Terrence sit in a science class.
NARRATOR
All will be revealed.
TERRENCE
We have the mile today.
NIKKO
Are you serious?
TERRENCE
Yes!
NIKKO
This is not good. This is the worst possible thing that could happen.
QUICK CUTS:
-CRAZY DUDE shoots at him with his Machine gun
- Terrence kicks a kickball into a little kid's face.
-Nikko pets a dog that falls over and dies.
NIKKO
You know what? This day turned out a lot better than I expected. I didn't have to run the mile.
We PAN BACK to reveal the Crazy Dude pointing a shotgun at them.
TERRENCE
Like this is so much better.
TERRENCE AND NIKKO RUN THE MILE
TERRENCE
Idiot.
COMING FRIDAY, AUGUST 29th, 2008
--BREAK---
-The office of Daniel D.D., he has short white hair and wrinkly skin. Daniel D.D. writes some notes down on begins to strap on a bullet proof vest. He opens his blindfolds from his 5th story office in the Police Station. Daniel turns around to see The Goode-
Daniel D.D.-
The Goode, it’s… good to see you here.
The Goode- (VO)
This man is honest and one hell of a cop. His arrest record would put Hitler’s murder record to shame. The man has arrested just about everyone in this damned city but The Judges are given some zing to keep the crooks on the streets. If the city runs wild then the big cats can better control it to there advantage.
Daniel D.D.-
We got some reports from the docks.
The Goode-
Yeah… what did you get?
Daniel D.D.-
Appears that Doc Danger and Death had a deal gone wrong, about 7 corpses.
The Goode-
Death kill any of them?
Daniel D.D.-
Don’t be silly…
-Daniel D.D. grabs a handgun and loads it-
Daniel D.D.-
… Death doesn’t kill anyone.
-The Goode pulls out a stick of gum and begins to chew it-
The Goode- (VO)
Winter-fresh. Helps me relax.
Daniel D.D.-
He’s too much of a gent to kill someone. He’d have someone do it for him.
The Goode-
Any way to get him for it?
Daniel D.D.-
Are you kidding? There’s no way I could lay a finger on him. If I could get the perfect evidence, it’d just end up be a waist, he’d pay the whole damn court to be quiet.
The Goode-
What do we do?
Daniel D.D.-
Goode, I can’t go on like this. This is bullshit.
The Goode-
Suggestions?
Daniel D.D.-
Where not playing by the law anymore.
The Goode-
It’s about time.
Daniel D.D.-
I’m ready to walk into Death’s office and kill him myself.
The Goode-
Why not?
Daniel D.D.-
Because if I fail, then I’ll have to go to court and he’ll pay the Judge to make sure I can the longest sentence ever thought of.
The Goode-
Well…
Daniel D.D.-
That’s why you’re going to do it.
The Goode-
Really now?
Daniel D.D.-
He can get me easily. But as for you, not so much.
The Goode-
Interesting.
Daniel D.D.-
I’ll let you go without rules.
The Goode-
About time.
-The Goode begins to walk toward a window-
Daniel D.D.-
But… you have to remain cool and only kill the bad guys.
The Goode-
Is there any other kind of person in this city?
-The Goode jumps out of the window-
Daniel D.D.-
Good point.
-Cut to a tall tower in the middle of a rotten neighborhood. Death looks outside his window to see bits of snow falling-
Death-
Gentlemen… “tis the season”. The first snow falls like an angel from Heaven. We need to secure are… “reputation” as the good family in this city. That’s why tomorrow, at midnight, where going to pour 100,000 onto this city.
-The camera spins to reveal a long table full of different men wearing nice suits, the youngest seems to be in his mid 30s, the oldest in his late 80s. There “The Rain Men”. A group of men who own different “districts” in the city. Most own a street or two but there is 5 main “fat cats” (gang leaders): Death and Doc Danger are two of them-
Death-
Resident Jacko…
-Cut to Resident Jacko: he has dark skin, light blue eyes and thin long hair wearing a blue suit, a very nice one at that with a bright orange tie-
Death-
… what do you think of this… humble act?
Resident Jacko-
I think you’re a jackass for inviting us all here.
Death-
Yes, I know we have never truly gotten along but we have to show the public that we aren’t greedy men.
Resident Jacko-
I’d like to respect you. I’d really like to respect you a lot but this idea was childish and too be honest… I’d rather go back to us minding are own business.
Death-
Well, I guess you don’t want to give a donation?
Resident Jacko-
No.
Death-
Well then, O Eye?
-Cut to O Eye. The man is extremely skinny, his pale skin, bald and his eyes are completely black with dark purple circles under his eyes, it seems as if he is naked but no genitals show, probably a skin tight outfit vacuumed unto him. His voice is hollow, almost faint-
O Eye-
What it does with it’s money concerns not O Eye, not at all.
Death-
Predictable.
O Eye-
If my response was predictable to your question, then why does it still ask said question?
Death-
Sorry to waste my energy. Where’s Martin Q. Ronald?
--BREAK--
"In the way of Clerks and several other films similar, good dialogue and characters go a long way"-y2gatti
-Danif drives in his car while on the phone with Zack-
Danif Rap-
Hello?
"Like a mix of Superbad and Clerks"- BlackSuit_CrimeBoss
Danif Rap-
What’s up?
-Danif pulls in Zack’s front yard. He has a green “1 Up” shirt on and Iron Man boxers. He runs up to Danif’s window-
Danif Rap-
Where’s your pants?
-Cut to The Maul’s Mall. Zack and Danif walk into it. Cut to them in “The Comic Shop”. Zack hits the lights and Danif grabs a box of comics and begins to open them. He puts them on shelves. Zack goes into a back room and is now wearing black shorts-
Danif Rap-
Well look at you, wearing pants… like a normal person, I better call your mom and tell the good news.
"If Clerks and Mallrats had a baby and Xplay raised it, this is it"- Batman
-Jane Willow walks in with a “I Believe in Harvey Dent” shirt, blue jeans, a green and brown striped mini-skirt over it and her hair pulled back-
Jane Willow-
My mother sold all of her Barbies, in mint condition to pay my way to college.
Zack Woody-
Yea, put it’s not like college really matters. Besides, you still got another week until school’s out and then you get a whole summer till college starts, nothing to worry about.
-Cut to Zack in the room alone with Jesus-
"Go see it"- SCF Films
Jesus Christ-
Hay, hay, hay, hay!
Zack Woody-
JESUS CHRIST!
Jesus Christ-
Not so loud man, I don’t want them to know I’m here.
Zack Woody-
Who are they?
Jesus Christ-
The chicks, I’m like… The Beatles or something.
The Comic Shop
Out Now
Rated R
--BREAK--
-Cut to a pure white bathroom. A muscled up man with gold hair lays in the tub while looking at the mirror at himself. This is Martin Q. Ronald-
The Goode- (VO)
Martin Q. Ronald was at the bottom of the gang leaders. He never went to the meetings because he figured it wouldn’t affect him. Martin had four guards out of his bathtub. He has a self-obsession, watching his own every move. Martin has a sister named Jennifer Ronald who is the real head of the gang, she knows he couldn’t run a gang to save his life but he makes for a good public image. I’ll deal with her some other way later, something more “classy”. But first, I want to see if this man has as much as muscle as he claims.
-A window near the entrance of the door breaks open and The Goode is revealed, he quickly locks the door-
Martin Q. Ronald-
The Goode, what in god’s name are you doing here?
The Goode-
Needed to check and see if you needed help wiping your ass.
Martin Q. Ronald-
You little piece of shit…
-Martin Q. Ronald rises from the tub-
Martin Q. Ronald-
I’m gonna give you the ass whipping you deserve!
-Martin rushes toward The Goode who begins to stand on his tiptoes. Martin gets closer then The Goode flings his foot straight in this face and the other leg reaches up and bashes him in the stomach, Martin quickly falls to the ground. The Goode jumps on top of Martin, pulls out a knife and puts it too his throat-
The Goode-
I want you to get dressed and go to that meeting, tell them The Goode Is coming for them next…
Martin Q. Ronald-
And if I don’t?
-The Goode pulls out a needle and jams it in Martin’s left butt cheek-
The Goode-
Then I won’t give you the cure.
-The Goode silently disappears into a shadow-
Martin Q. Ronald-
Oh… OH GOD!
-Cut to a rooftop. Daniel D.D. holds a cup of coffee and looks over the city. The Goode arrives-
Daniel D.D.-
How’d it go?
The Goode-
Well. They’ll know that they’ve been targeted.
Daniel D.D.-
It’d be bad press to see us together. The good cop and the mad vigilante.
The Goode-
How many times have I told you? There is no such thing as bad press.
-The Goode jumps off the building. Cut to Martin Q. Ronald walking into the mob meeting, naked-
Death-
Martin… it’s…. nice of you to show your… face…
Martin Q. Ronald-
The Goode is coming.
Death-
What?
Martin Q. Ronald-
The good wants you to know that he’s coming for all of you.
Resident Jacko-
If that freak comes even a foot away from me, I’m ripping his goddamn head off!
Death-
Well, it appears where not all to happy about this…
-Cut to a lousy apartment. A fat brown cat walks around, trash laying everywhere. The Goode comes in from the darkness, naked. He crawls into his bed, there is a woman there also-
The Goode- (VO)
Lucy. Every second on the job I feel sorrow for her. I’m rarely home, off doing this or that. But… she doesn’t leave me. I’ve been telling her that the time will come for The Goode to be useless, no need for him. I’ve been saying that every night for the last 5 years, she wants a child… but I can’t let her have a child in a place like this. This plan, to do it dirty, just go in there and slice there throats… the old me would never do something like that… but this city changes people… for better or worse. But I swear on my soul that the second there all dead and this City can rebuild itself… I’ll throw down the tights, and father a child that Lucy deserves.
