Post by Joey Jojo Junior Shabadoo on Jun 1, 2010 23:02:17 GMT -5
- Joey talks about how this was just an outline, and the actual thing isn't finished.
- He talks about how Max seems to have some pretty good stuff going here, if he actually finished it.
- There is a mention of how this felt a bit like Iron Man 1 and 2, only with many more references to the rest of the Marvel universe.
- This is followed by the admission that the plot is interesting, and would make for a good story if fleshed out.
- A quick note is made about how Joey didn't quite understand exactly what Spider-Man was doing at various points, like at the beginning of the film, as well as how he seemed to just show up at other random moments, and how the cameos by all the characters were cool and entertaining, but Spidey was the only one who just seemed to show up sometimes. The Hulk/She-Hulk references seemed a little forced as well, but they could probably be made better when fleshed out by dialogue and such.
- The conclusion is made that this would be great if actualy finished, but as of yet, it is still vaugue and hard to grasp, and the author is encouraged to get to work on it, as they clearly have a great outline here.
- He talks about how Max seems to have some pretty good stuff going here, if he actually finished it.
- There is a mention of how this felt a bit like Iron Man 1 and 2, only with many more references to the rest of the Marvel universe.
- This is followed by the admission that the plot is interesting, and would make for a good story if fleshed out.
- A quick note is made about how Joey didn't quite understand exactly what Spider-Man was doing at various points, like at the beginning of the film, as well as how he seemed to just show up at other random moments, and how the cameos by all the characters were cool and entertaining, but Spidey was the only one who just seemed to show up sometimes. The Hulk/She-Hulk references seemed a little forced as well, but they could probably be made better when fleshed out by dialogue and such.
- The conclusion is made that this would be great if actualy finished, but as of yet, it is still vaugue and hard to grasp, and the author is encouraged to get to work on it, as they clearly have a great outline here.
