The Comic Shop TV Spot #1

[Xplayadam]

-Zack Woody and Danif Rap stand in The Comic Shop as a customer walks in-

Zack Woody-
What the fake do you what?

Customer #1-
Hay, what’s the problem?

Zack Woody-
Look you nosey dick, are you going to buy something or not?

Customer #1-
Who the hell hired you?

Zack Woody-
Your mom, after I pleasured her...

-The Customer walks out-

Danif Rap-
WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR?

Zack Woody-
I don’t know, just a little tense.

Danif Rap-
That was a respectable costumer!

Zack Woody-
So?

There not there to do there jobs...

-Danif and Jane leave a room and walk back to The Comic Shop-

Zack Woody-
What took you so long?

Danif Rap-
Just helping her out.

Zack Woody-
I bet you where.

Jane Willow-
Where they any costumers?

Zack Woody-
Yea. 1. He bought a copy of Green Lantern and I told him that I was feeling so generous that I gave it too him free of charge.

Jane Willow-
So, one second you calling off costumers and the next, your giving them free comics!

Zack Woody-
Ain’t I a stinker

There not there to have fun...

Danif Rap-
Could you do something simple?

Zack Woody-
Like what?

Danif Rap-
Like… go hang up some posters for the store.

Zack Woody-
Where?

Danif Rap-
Somewhere where people will be able to look at them?

Zack Woody-
Alrighty.

-Zack walks off-

There not there for any reason but...

-Cut to Danif and Zack standing outside The Comic Shop-

Danif Rap-
Did you hang up the posters?

Zack Woody-
Yea...

Danif Rap-
Where?

Just being there...

-Cut to Jane sitting down in a stall. She looks up to see a bunch of signs for “The Comic Shop”-

Jane Willow-
What the hell?

The Comic Shop

August 1

Rated R

[Bob Ross]

I'm confused...this sounds promising, but every time I read dialogue...it just sounds really lame. Maybe it just isn't my style.

[boust]

You know what really grinds my gears?

When people never use 'there', 'their', and 'they're' in proper context.

[Hanelle]

I noticed that, but I figured maybe he was in a hurry. Your and you're is one that I catch myself on as well