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Post by Cristo on Sept 29, 2009 21:47:30 GMT -5
(Cristo Productions)
(Fade in to some blood running through the snow)
Man VO: What makes a good story?
(The camera pans out and we see a suit of armor covered in blood lying as the snow falls around him)
Man VO: Is it the main character?
(The hand twitches)
Man VO: The loyal sidekick?
(Cut to a man in tears kneeling in the snow)
Man VO: The romantic love interest?
(Cut to a man and woman kissing in front of an enourmous spaceship)
Man VO: Or is all that matters the antagonist?
(Cut to a man kneeling before an empty throne with a gun in his hand)
(Cut to the knight lying in the snow)
(We pan out to see the man who is talking)
(He is standing over the knight with a bloody sword)
Man: Is the villain the only one who matters?
(He holds the sword over the fallen knight)
Man: Will this end as a heroic fable?
(He swings his sword down)
(Cut to black)
Man VO: Or a cathartic tragedy?
EVERY GOOD STORY
Coming Soon
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Post by larah on Sept 29, 2009 21:51:12 GMT -5
cool teaser. do wish to know more.
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Post by Casablanca on Sept 29, 2009 22:57:27 GMT -5
It is a neat teaser, and seems to be a very intresting film. Will the story itself revolve around story telling?
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Post by Cristo on Sept 29, 2009 23:13:42 GMT -5
It is a neat teaser, and seems to be a very intresting film. Will the story itself revolve around story telling? Yes
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Post by Movie Lord Productions on Sept 29, 2009 23:55:14 GMT -5
Nice writing, Cristo. Very good teaser.
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Post by Natalie on Sept 30, 2009 5:24:20 GMT -5
a good writer, I presume.
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