Post by Casablanca on Sept 13, 2009 23:49:08 GMT -5
First off, these are not descriptions from the film, but the scenes are. Secondly, this movie should be done in a week or two (maybe three), so plese see it, since I would love feedback. Thank you.
A Film by Casablanca3491
The “Monte Laloux”
We open to a shot of a hotel lobby; busy with people walking about. Thomas Rutherford, a middle aged man, walks through the doors and begins to approach the front desk.
The Desk Clerk
A clerk stands behind the main desk in the hotel lobby. He is doing paperwork very intently.
The “Red Arrow”
We see a nice restaurant with plenty of seats, and waiter’s carrying trays of exquisite food. Thomas sits at one table, not looking at his table, but looking around the room- looking for something.
The Woman
We see a woman standing by the entrance to a large party. She is wearing a fine dress with her hair put up. She looks uneasy, though, as if she does not usually attend these formal affairs.
The Butcher
A butcher cuts various forms of meat, including three pounds of pork loin and steak tenderloin. He packages them up and rings them out to eighteen dollars.
The Telephone
A sole telephone sits in the hotel lobby, near the main desk. A sign hangs that instructs the caller to simply dial “nine” and you will be connected to your line.
The Wine
A glass of wine sits on a table, clearly after a night of heavy drinking. It is expensive, and if it sits out too long, is bound to spoil.
The Picture
We see a picture of a woman, framed, and on an end table. The woman is smiling and wearing a blue dress.
The Barber Shop
We see a barber salon. Thomas sits at one of the chairs in the waiting room. The noise of someone else entering can be heard.
“The Days of Concord”
Coming Soon
The “Monte Laloux”
We open to a shot of a hotel lobby; busy with people walking about. Thomas Rutherford, a middle aged man, walks through the doors and begins to approach the front desk.
The Desk Clerk
A clerk stands behind the main desk in the hotel lobby. He is doing paperwork very intently.
The “Red Arrow”
We see a nice restaurant with plenty of seats, and waiter’s carrying trays of exquisite food. Thomas sits at one table, not looking at his table, but looking around the room- looking for something.
The Woman
We see a woman standing by the entrance to a large party. She is wearing a fine dress with her hair put up. She looks uneasy, though, as if she does not usually attend these formal affairs.
The Butcher
A butcher cuts various forms of meat, including three pounds of pork loin and steak tenderloin. He packages them up and rings them out to eighteen dollars.
The Telephone
A sole telephone sits in the hotel lobby, near the main desk. A sign hangs that instructs the caller to simply dial “nine” and you will be connected to your line.
The Wine
A glass of wine sits on a table, clearly after a night of heavy drinking. It is expensive, and if it sits out too long, is bound to spoil.
The Picture
We see a picture of a woman, framed, and on an end table. The woman is smiling and wearing a blue dress.
The Barber Shop
We see a barber salon. Thomas sits at one of the chairs in the waiting room. The noise of someone else entering can be heard.
“The Days of Concord”
Coming Soon
