Post by blg on Sept 6, 2009 15:55:34 GMT -5
There's not a lot I can say about this very, very, very short script. It's well-written, there's no doubt about that, but with a script as short as this the visuals would provide half of the experience if filmed, and without that the experience is a little flat. I know Max is planning on filming for realsies at some point, so I think for the time being I'll hold off giving it a score, as there isn't much to say other than that this would make an excellent short film.