Sanders vs Toberts Review

[Dale]

Alright, I finished Jomo's script last night, but wanted to reflect on it a bit first before I reviewed it.

The idea is very original, and for the most part, Jomo does a good job of writing it.

There are a few times when I really did laugh out loud because of a new one liners, "Please don't rape me", etc. It really is pretty witty and funny.

I wouldn't call it perfect by any means. The comic stuff gets tired quickly, so does Glenn and his antics, and the relationship between Tammy/Eric is stereotypical.

Overall, it's a solid script and a great first effort.

3.5/5

[Casablanca]

"The comic stuff gets tired quickly"

I do very much agree with this; these are the moments where the film just really drags at, in spots, as well as when it really just becomes chatty, dropping anything of real value.

[jomo]

Aug 17, 2009 13:36:03 GMT -5 Casablanca said:

"The comic stuff gets tired quickly"

I do very much agree with this; these are the moments where the film just really drags at, in spots, as well as when it really just becomes chatty, dropping anything of real value.

I see where you're both coming from.

I kinda wrote it as them trying to "out geek" one another, maybe I overdid it a bit. I see what you mean.