Post by Dale on Aug 16, 2009 11:03:32 GMT -5
Oh dear God. How I wish I never read this.
Indy, this might be the worst script I've read on the site, and I'm really sorry to say that.
But it's an awful script. The plot is one huge massive clusterfuck, characters have absolutely no development, the action is ridiculous, and only somewhat realistic. I almost thought it was a comedy at first, but then I realized you were serious about this being an action movie.
Listen, this was just 46 pages of people saying either f*ck or fuck (seriously, pick one or the other), just random shooting, and bad/campy plot developments and dialogue.
People were dying and then coming back, nothing made sense, ugh, it was just really, REALLY bad.
I'm only saying this because I'd like to see you write a really good script, but producing shit like this is awful.
.5/5
Indy, this might be the worst script I've read on the site, and I'm really sorry to say that.
But it's an awful script. The plot is one huge massive clusterfuck, characters have absolutely no development, the action is ridiculous, and only somewhat realistic. I almost thought it was a comedy at first, but then I realized you were serious about this being an action movie.
Listen, this was just 46 pages of people saying either f*ck or fuck (seriously, pick one or the other), just random shooting, and bad/campy plot developments and dialogue.
People were dying and then coming back, nothing made sense, ugh, it was just really, REALLY bad.
I'm only saying this because I'd like to see you write a really good script, but producing shit like this is awful.
.5/5
