'The Forgotten Sons' teaser

[Jester- PsychoBunnyProductions]

TITLE: Psycho Bunny Productions present...

A Pelé Hearne film

Fade in...

A typical British neighborhood. Several houses clustered together in a row, each with long gardens. Only aging wooden fences separate the gardens. The sun peeks through an overcast sky up above. Children can be heard playing distantly, perhaps in other garden. The camera pulls down into one particular garden. A clothes line covered in socks and underwear suddenly bursts alive.

A dirty DANGEROUS MAN wearing work boots, a filthy hoodie and worn jeans kicks through the clothes line. He is panicked and manic . He charges for the fence and bolts over landing in the next garden just as a bullet explodes into the wood of the fence behind him.

Another clothes line blocks his way. He thrashes about like a mad man as a bedsheet tangles itself around him. The wind blows... Through bedsheets the DANGEROUS MAN glimpses a figure appoarching...

DANGEROUS MAN pulls himself free. Panting in fear he backs off to the back of the garden. No good. A tall Oak tree and shed block him from going any further.

PAUSE.

Slowly the bedsheets from the clothes line part. A tall handsomish looking man with dark hair and eyes exits. He looks tired and weary. He is young, possibly in his late 20's. Thick short black hair gleams in the sun. A long thin black coat makes this young man appear pretty darn badass.

The DANGEROUS MAN pants for breath.

DANGEROUS MAN
Why you getting involved man?

MAN IN COAT *panting*
Money.

DANGEROUS MAN
So what you gonna do? You gonna shoot me?!

MAN IN COAT
Yes. That's what I've been trying to do.

DANGEROUS MAN
What the fuck? You cant shoot me! I got rights!

MAN IN COAT
You want a fucking lawyer?

DANGEROUS MAN
Yes I wanna see my fucking lawyer! I'm reporting you. I got rights. I know the law.

MAN IN COAT
Well its my absolute pleasure to tell you, I'm not the law.

DANGEROUS MAN
Then who the hell are you?

PAUSE

JON DOE
My name is Jon Doe. I am a man for hire known as a Long Coat and I am owned by an Organization that has sent me out here to kill your low jean wearing ass and drag your cocky little corpse back to your ex girlfriend for a lovely sum that her new lover has slipped under my door. Got all that?

DANGEROUS MAN
I can- I can pay more. I swear it.

JON DOE
Oh, I'm sorry. It doesn't quite work out like that. If you have a major problem feel free to contact my Organization. In the mean time, hold still whilst I shoot you.

Suddenly an OLD LADY appears at the window of the garden and taps on it. She peers out curiously, obviously expecting her old eye sight is tricking her. JON DOE turns to look. As he does, DANGEROUS MAN bolts for it. JON DOE takes a deep breath.

JON DOE
Why do they always run?

CUT TO BLACK

TITLE: "The Long Coats trilogy"
TITLE 2: "The Forgotten Sons"

Coming august 23rd

[Jester- PsychoBunnyProductions]

Tell me what ya think boys and girls.

[TStape]

I like it a lot sir. Is the first in the series or did you once post the first because I feel like I remember "The Long Coats".

[Xplayadam]

Awesome shit my friend. Your knack for action is always something I desire. Look forward to it.

[Jester- PsychoBunnyProductions]

Cheers Xplay

Dazzle, I originally made The Long Coats as an hour and 42mins film which I posted back in 2008. August 28th 2008. This is my reinvention of it. The second two parts are completely new works.

[TStape]

Jul 24, 2011 3:28:10 GMT -5 Jester- PsychoBunnyProductions said:

Cheers Xplay

Dazzle, I originally made The Long Coats as an hour and 42mins film which I posted back in 2008. August 28th 2008. This is my reinvention of it. The second two parts are completely new works.

Well this is Bats, not Dazzle but cool.

[Cannon]

Looking forward to reading this in full.

[Jester- PsychoBunnyProductions]

Thanks Cannon you dude.

Oh shit, sorry Bats. Clearly didnt read that properly.

[Dale]

Really enjoyed the original Long Coats and remember it well. So glad you're revisiting that world. I really like the dark comedy that comes through here with the little quips like "hold still whilst i shoot you".

And obviously in written form you're not as constricted as you were to the filmed version so I'm looking forward to the envelope being pushed a tad further. So totally looking forward to this.

[Jester- PsychoBunnyProductions]

Cheers Daz. Thats exactly why I wanted to come back to the series. I was far too restricted in filming it. The first script does have a lot of dark comedy in it, but it does get pretty depressing at times. The second is probably my favourite so far. Once I redraft it and somehow cut it down from 201 pages.... :s The third so far is a dream to write. I just hope it doesn't end up as long as the second part.