Indefinitely Delayed

[Dale]

presents

Indefinitely Delayed

Cast
Jeffrey Donovan -- HENRY J. PHILLIPS
Chi McBride -- TYRELL THOMAS
Jewel Staite -- SUNNY HONEYCUTT
Kandyse McClure - AMIA BAILEY
Aziz Ansari - NIKHIL DESHPANDE

Plot
When Henry J. Phillips is killed by a Sixteen Wheeler Truck, he finds himself in Purgatory, which bares an odd resemblance to an Airport. He is told by the staff that populate it that to move on, he must "check" his baggage and find peace with himself. Until then, he will be, Indefinitely Delayed.

Episodes

1x01 - Pilot
Summary: Henry J. Phillips is hit by a Sixteen Wheeler Truck. He is dead. Now he finds himself in Purgatory which suspiciously resembles an Airport.

1x02 - TBA
1x03 - TBA
1x04 - TBA
1x05 - TBA
1x06 - Finale

[Natalie]

I think this has great potential, and can imagine some jokes mocking the airport prices/duty free somewhere.
I know it might not be, but would you say it's similar to Dead like me?

[TStape]

I like this a lot Daz. Interested to see where you do with this and such. I'll be sure to keep reading.

[Jester- PsychoBunnyProductions]

"Nothing really. I was just thinking
the same about self righteous,
uptight, good looking women who don’t
feel the need to look down because
they expect things to just jump out
of the way." - Nearly high fived the screen. Yes Daz. You tell that bitch!

That whole scene was sharp and I loved it.


Tyrell is brilliant.

I love the word flabbergasted.

Sunny breaking out of character was great.

Great ending. I loved how it turned serious.

I actually loved it Daz. Didn't have a single problem with it. Thought it was great. Please keep writing it, just for my sake lol. I have realised I enjoy reading your work so much, so gimmie more kind sir.

[Dale]

Aug 18, 2011 7:12:31 GMT -5 Jester- PsychoBunnyProductions said:

"Nothing really. I was just thinking
the same about self righteous,
uptight, good looking women who don’t
feel the need to look down because
they expect things to just jump out
of the way." - Nearly high fived the screen. Yes Daz. You tell that bitch!

That whole scene was sharp and I loved it.


Tyrell is brilliant.

I love the word flabbergasted.

Sunny breaking out of character was great.

Great ending. I loved how it turned serious.

I actually loved it Daz. Didn't have a single problem with it. Thought it was great. Please keep writing it, just for my sake lol. I have realised I enjoy reading your work so much, so gimmie more kind sir.

thank you very much for the review. Glad you enjoyed it. And I do plan to continue writing it, have a few outlines for episodes worked out.

And that scene was by far my favourite to write in the whole episode. And the easiest. Just thought the personality of the characters clicked really well.

[Jester- PsychoBunnyProductions]

Yeah they really did. It was a really well written scene. Snappy and humorous. I liked that female character a lot.