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[imnotazombie]

OK, so heres a little 6 page teaser for my new script I'm working on. Really its my first script, if I finish it that is. This idea is like my first Idea I've had since like early september 2009, it's like my first idea I've had since I've wanted to really hopefully be a writer.

So considering this is like my first script, I expect it to get SLAMMED. This teaser is just the first 6 pages, and its mainly just dialog, pretty mundane stuff. But the ending of the script is really what this is gonna be about more than anything. I won't go into detail cause if your not surprised it'll be pointless : D

So yeah this teaser ain't really nothing THAT special, but I know exactly where its all going, and I think once its done its gonna be awesome. For now, criticalness is welcomed if not also dreaded haha....

www.megaupload.com/?d=3Q15QSAI

[Cannon]

Interesting, definitely interesting.

The dialogue at times seemed a bit forced, but I'm sure as you tweak it during the writing process things like that will change. I liked the twist, should be good to see where you go with it.

Good luck sir.

[imnotazombie]

Thanks : D