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Post by Dale on May 2, 2008 13:09:38 GMT -5
Blood Thirsty Men Director
Xplayadam
Genre
Drama
Cast
Simon Pegg - Jude "The Evil Mood" Rumon
Jackie Early Haley - Jack "The Devlish Tack" Fogg
Javier Bardem - Kane "The Demonic Pain" Lewis
Ron Perlman - Tom "The Firey Bomb" Scott
Johnny Depp - Officer Rupertmen
Christian Bale - Officer Lemmer
Nicole Kidman - Bella Rumon
Plot
Four Cowboys from Four parts of the world are hired to pull off one of the biggest robberies ever. The 3 weeks that they train for it will led to the men creating close bonds and violent rivalries.
Release Date
May 2nd, 2008
MPAA Rating
Rated R for Graphic Blood Violence, Strong Language and a brief sex-scene.
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Post by Dale on May 2, 2008 13:16:47 GMT -5
BLOOD THIRSTY MEN
Written/Directed by Xplayadam
Starring…
Simon Pegg … Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon-
Jackie Early Haley… Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg
Javier Bardem… Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis
Ron PerlMan… Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott-
Johnny Depp… Officer Rupertmen
Christian Bale… Officer Lemmer
Nicole KidMan… Bella Rumon
Rated R for Graphic Blood Violence, Strong Language and a brief sex-scene
Dedicated to Heath Ledger
-Oldstown. A small wooden City in the west. The deep red sun settles on this little piece of heaven. It’s small. The year is 1889. Where cowboys run free. A small building stands in the middle of this town. It houses the Town’s two officers. Rupertmen; looks to be in his late 30’s, a nice moustache with slicked back hair. Wearing a rigid brown coat. His partner enters. Office Lemmer; black hair that goes down to his back and a clean smooth face. Lemmer puts his hat down. He gives Rupertmen a look-
Officer Lemmer-
Im about ready to call it a day.
Officer Rupertmen-
Yea, been a damn tough week. Got them moonshiners coming up North.
Officer Lemmer-
Yes sir, them damn men think they can bring there alcohol here on a Sunday? Aint them the sorriest sumsbitchs ya ever seen?
Officer Rupertmen-
Amen. Good think we can put the law into are own hands.
Officer Lemmer-
Good think we can make the laws up here.
Officer Rupertmen-
Well Lemmer, I hope you have yourself a good sleep. You deserve it.
Officer Lemmer-
When is you and Nancy finally gonna tie the string?
Officer Rupertmen-
Ooo… I got Many years for that stuff.
Officer Lemmer-
Well then, night!
Officer Rupertmen-
Night Lemmer. May God bless!
Officer Lemmer-
May God bless!
-We follow Officer Lemmer as he walks out the front door. The paddles swing open. Lemmer grabs a cup of water which sits softly upon a old rusty table on the front porch. He mounts his black coated horse and rides off in the wind. We move towards the moon. A zoom out shows a old locomotive going threw it’s tracks. Black gas blows out of it’s top. We enter a box car. Hay is scatted everywhere. Upon some of this hay is a Man. This Man has a orange beard and a black hat. He wears your standard cowboy suit with plus of a red scarf around his neck. He holds onto his gun hostler waiting. This is Jude “The Evil” Rumon. Behind him is a woMan with a torn dress and her blonde her in two ponytails. She is Bella Rumon, his wife. Jude spits out of the cart-
Bella Rumon-
Damnit Jude, Carl isn’t going to get us.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
He said he would. Remember when we left London? Remember what he yelled at me? He said “Jude! You son of a bitch! I’ll going to come and gut your ass if you dare go to America!”. I know that my father would never lie to a promise he made, never!
Bella Rumon-
Why does your dad not want us together?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Because… Because my Dad thinks that I aint no good. He really liked you. He liked you a lot. He wanted you and he is damn well going to kill his son without a hesitate to get you.
Bella Rumon-
And I use to think he was a proper Christian.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Let me tell you a story. When I was but a few months old, he Dad met a young gal. This young pretty thing was something my Dad… obsessed over. He loved this girl so much, but not in a emotional way. He didn’t fancy her for the way so talked or the way she acted. He fancy her for her looks. He said she had the best body he ever seen. One day, he mother was… feeding me. He grabbed the kitchen knife and pulled her head away. He then used that knife to… cut… her throat. There I was… a few months old…
-Tears begin to run down Jude’s face. Bella begins to breath hard, wanting to cry-
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
My Mother’s blood… covering my face… and he went to that girl…
Bella Rumon-
Oh… oh god, please… please don’t say anymore
-Bella covers her face with the end of her dress, soaking up the fresh tears-
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
And he loved that Girl… more… more… more then my own mother
-Jude begins to cry real hard. He pulls up his gun and pulls the trigger. A blast goes threw the wall. A large shrieking nose can heard. The train stops. Jude stops crying-
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Bella, stay here…
-Bella’s face is red and she is breathing hard. Jude gets out of the cart. A Man in a uniform, a blue coat and pants comes toward. He is holding a lantern-
Train Driver-
I don’t remember you coming on the Train!
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Mister. My name is Jude Rumon. I am considered the greatest cowboy in England. I have pulled off more robberies then I can damn well count. I have a wife in that cart. Do you want to know what they call me?
Train Driver-
Yer a robber? Dear God…
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
They call me The Evil Mood. Do you wanna know why? Because I got this temper. I real bad temper. I have this story. This story about a blood covered baby, who just wanted his mother. I think of this Story… ever time I kill someone. I just know thought of it.
Train Driver-
DEAR GOD! DON’T SHOT!
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
I don’t like to break a promise.
-The Train Driver turns around and begins to run. Jude pulls up his gun from it’s hostler. His finger pushes the trigger. A blast from the gun reaches out. It goes flying into the Train Driver’s neck. A blast of blood smacks across the Train Driver’s face. A small hole is in his neck. He falls to the ground. Jude pulls out a tin case of water. He drinks it. He goes up to the Train Driver and checks for some money. He does indeed find some and puts it in his coat pocket. Jude returns to his cart-
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Bella?
Bella Rumon-
Yes?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Get yer stuff.
Bella Rumon-
You killed him. Didn’t you?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
That doesn’t matter as of know. Where leaving.
-Jude grabs her and they begin to kiss. They let ago after a few seconds and Bella grabs a brown bag from the hay. Jude carries her out of the cart and she gets on her legs. They begin to run off into the desert. We cut to a boat. On this boat is three men. Two are wearing large green coats while the hard rains pours. There are hard at sea. The third Man, the leader has short blonde hair. He his a thin moustache and wears a brown coat with a green vest. A red bandana covers his lips, his name is Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Sailor #1-
So, ya come all the way from GerMany?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Yes Sir.
Sailor #1-
What would be yer business in America?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I got sent an offer.
Sailor #2-
What kind of a offer?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Well, I am pretty damn good at stealing stuff.
Sailor #2-
You’re a thief?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Yes Sir.
Sailor #1-
And what kind of a offer was this?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Well, there is a bank. The bank is belonging to America’s biggest city. Imagine all that gold. Pounds and Pounds of it. So damn much you could go swim in it. So much, all the kings and queens would even say “Would you look at that! Have you ever seen so much gold in your entire life?”. That is what they would say.
Sailor #1-
And yer gonna rob it?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Well, it isn’t a robbery that could be pulled of by one guy. Needs four.
Sailor #2-
And exactly who is going to help you?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Don’t know yet.
Sailor #1-
What if this guy, the guy who set it up is like… some liar er something?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
And what would you mean by saying something like that?
Sailor #1-
Well, what if you come here…er… to him and he isn’t there. Just some guy pulling ar funny.
Sailor #2-
Yea, some kinda funny gent?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Well then… If I met this sumbitch and he damn well did the same thing you told me… then… I’d have to do something… like this!
-Tom quickly pulls out a gun and grabs Sailor #1. He puts the gun in his mouth and pulls the trigger. The blood is lost in the massive amounts of rain. He throws the Sailor over the small wooden boat, his body to float around Sea-
Sailor #2-
Jesus… Jesus Christ!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I do stuff like that at random. I am a crazy sumbitch. I am the bastards of bastards. I came from GerMany, you shouldn’t fuck with me! I kill people for amusement. My nick name is “The Fiery Bomb”. You never will know what I am going to do. Now, row this boat to America.
Sailor #2-
ALRIGHT! ALRIGHT!
-The Sailor turns around while he bits his lip. Tom begins to laugh. We cut to a Graveyard. A Man is sitting on a bench while his breath came be seen. He has curly black hair and a clean cut face. He is a little skinny. He holds on tight to his thin black coat and fingerless gloves, his name is Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis. A Man in a long coat with a large bear approaches. He has a top hat-
King Ronald-
Kane Lewis?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
That is me.
King Ronald-
Your wanted.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
I don’t know how Many times I have to tell you, I was set up.
King Ronald-
And I don’t know how Many times we have to say that we have prove. Now get your ass up, it’s freezing.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
I didn’t think that they would send the King after me.
King Ronald-
Well, my officers are off for the Night.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Are they?
King Ronald-
Yes. Why did you burn the Church down in the first place?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Do you know what they did to my sister?
King Ronald-
Christ… here we go again.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
My sister was in trouble. She had a dieing mother and asked the Priest to talk. Just a conversation to attempt and find her some meaning. You know what he did to her? He raped her. And what did you do… you let it go.
King Ronald-
You know what the papers call you.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
What?
King Ronald-
The Demonic Pain. They know the story, you where in Pain and… you turned to Satan.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
I NEVER DID ANYTHING LIKE THAT!
King Ronald-
Do you believe in God?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Do I believe in God? No. Do I believe in Satan? No. Do I believe you have a proper court system? NO!
King Ronald-
Give me your gun.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
What?
King Ronald-
Give me your gun.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
No.
King Ronald-
Give me your gun or I’ll blast you in half.
-King Ronald pulls out a rifle and points it at him-
King Ronald-
I also raped your sister. You didn’t know… did you?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Wha… What did you say?
-Kane’s eyes begin to sink back-
King Ronald-
O yes… I remember her soft breasts, her screaming, she plead me not too. Ripping her hair out. It felt so good… to hurt her.
-Kane grabs the rifle and shoves it in King Ronald’s mouth-
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
What did you say… you sumbitch? Tell me the story again.
-Tears role down King Ronald’s eyes-
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
TELL ME THE GODDAMN STORY AGAIN!
-We begin to close up on Kane’s face. A blast goes off. A shot of blood smacks Kane’s face. His eyes return to normal. King Ronald hits the cold ground. The camera zooms out as Kane begins to run far. A quick shot of him running toward the docks is visible. We return to Oldstown. There is a Man walking threw the town. He is bald. A clean cut face with deep blue eyes. He has a dark brown coat on with tight gloves and pants. His name is Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg-. He walks into a small building. A fat woMan in a pink gown sits at the front desk-
Inn Manager-
May I help you?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
My name is Jack Fogg. ‘Bout four months ago… I reserved four rooms.
Inn Manager-
Let me check…
-She turns around and opens a draw. She grabs a few sheets of paper and skims threw them-
Inn Manager-
Alright, your rooms are A1, A2, A3, and…. A4!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Alright, thank you.
Inn Manager-
You having family?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
No, got sum my buddies comin threw.
Inn Manager-
Alright, just don’t make a fuss!
-She opens a drawer and hands him some keys. He walks up the stairs and into A1. There is a simple bed, a mirror and a table. He sets down his satchel. The screen goes black. A captain informs us that it has been “Six Hours”. There is now four chairs. Two of them are occupied. Jack Fogg sits in one and Jude Rumon sits in the other-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Would like to thank you for coming out.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Thank you. Wife is in my room, sleeping.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Yea… I saw her, pretty little thing you got.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
While, thank you.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Why they call you The Evil Mood?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
I have this story. It haunts me. It gives me a Evil Mood, a killin mood.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Well then. You robbed banks before?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Oh yes, robbed Many a banks.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
The Bank we gonna rob is a few miles away.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
That is alright, don’t mind a little run.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
That is good.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Why they call you The Devilish Tack?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Because, I like to play tricks. My old friends used to yell at me, “YOU DEVILISH TACK!”. So, that nickname stuck with me for a long time. Still use it to these days…. So, you found a woMan who doesn’t care if you’re a goddamn criminal?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Yes sir… she is a real sweet thing… one time, she-
-The door opens. Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis enters. Jude and Jack look up-
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Is Jack Fogg here?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Yes, that’s me. Your Kane Lewis?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Yes, yes I am.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Kane Lewis this is Jude Rumon, Kane Lewis this is Jude Rumon.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Lewis-
Hello there.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Hi.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
We where sitting here explaining are nicknames. You letter gave us the name of… The Demonic Pain?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Well, that is true.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
I wouldn’t mind asking but… where did you get that name?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
I had a sister. She was… taken by a Priest. It made me feel a unforgettable pain. So I burned that Church down, they said I was Demonic. Hence, The Demonic Pain.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Now that there is a damn interesting story.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Is this the team?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Well, no. We have another solider be coming in soon.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
So, are we going to rob a bank or not?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Well, it is going to be a tough job. So, I suggest we get are minds together. We practice, get ready for the job. Take a few weeks to get and know eachother, become a team.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Well then… I am going to go get some rest.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Me also.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Night.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Alright, night boys.
-Jude and Kane walk out of the room. Jack grabs a bottle of moonshine and begins to drink-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Cheers!
-Jack lifts his bottle up. We enter room A2. Bella is in the bed covered in blankets. While Jude is taking his shirt off-
Bella Rumon-
So, how did the meeting go?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Went alright. Jack was a nice guy.
Bella Rumon-
Did you thank him for renting a room for us?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Forgot too.
Bella Rumon-
You should, real kind thing he did.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Real kind thing indeed.
-Jude takes his pants off, leaving himself nude. He grabs a blanket and covers himself as he lays down in the bed. He looks at her, they exchange a very gentle look. He kisses her. They began to kiss until she closes her eyes. He kisses her neck. She starts to move and we cut to black. The Wellington Docks. A smaller city then Oldstown. A small boat pulls up in. There is a young Man dead in it. Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott- gets out. He looks at a Man coming towards him. The Man is very young looking and is basically wearing rags-
Man-
Sir! Sir!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
What the hell do you want?
Man-
I wanted to welcome you to Wellington! A fine place with summer breezes! Might I recommend the Old Al’s Hotel? They offer great services?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Are you some queer or what?
Man-
I just wanted to say it’s are pleasure to have you?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Will you get your goddamn scruffy ass out of my way!
Man-
I am so sorry.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
If your so damn sorry, then what the hell are you doing?
Man-
Pardon me.
-The Man begins to walk away-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Wait… kid?
-He turns around-
Man-
Yes?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
You know where Oldstown is?
Man-
Yes. Up North… A few miles I reckon.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Im going to need a Horse.
Man-
Alright, wait right here… you do have around 6 gold?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Is that how much Horses cost?
Man-
No, to rent.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
How much does the sumbitch cost?
Man-
20 gold.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
20 gold? You got to be fucking me!
Man-
Well… it… it’s a horse.
-Tom pulls out a money sack, he counts to himself 4 coins-
Tom “Fiery Bomb” Scott-
I got 20 gold.
Man-
So, you want to buy it?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Hell yes, now go bring me my goddamn horse you skinny sumbitch!
Man-
Yes sir!
-The Man runs off. Tom grabs out a piece of paper and some matches. He sets it on fire and throws it into the boat. The boat begins to burn. He pulls out a large stick and then sets it on fire. He walks toward the town. There are 7 buildings. He begins to set them on fire. People scream. A officer comes toward him wearing the casual blue uniform-
Officer-
STOP!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
What?
Officer-
Your burning down the buildings! Stop now, your going to jail!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
You must be the dumbest officer.
Officer-
What did you say?
-Tom pulls out a rifle, he quickly loads it as the Officer’s face is covered in tears knowing his City is dieing. Tom looks at him and shots. A blasts goes out and smacks him in the chest. He falls to the ground, dead-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
A damn shame.
-The Man returns with a horse. He looks at the buildings with his eyes sinking back-
Man-
Dear god…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Got bored, you know that you took seventeen minutes to bring me that damn horse!
Man-
SIR!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Don’t you yell at me you sumbitch!
Man-
What in God’s name have you done?
-Tom fires his rifle at the Man. It hits him in the heart. Tom runs up to the horse and begins to ride off. He begins to laugh like a Manic as the place burns down. We cut back to the Inn. Jack is sitting down talking to Kane-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
So, you killed a king?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Yes sir, blew a hole in his neck.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Well, that is just amazing. A real king?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Yes.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
What was he king of?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
There is this little island off by Spain, it’s really Spain’s land but they let him have it.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
And why is that?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Felt sympathy for him.
-Jack busts out laughing and Kane gives a snicker-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
That is a goddamn funny story!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Yes, I guess it is.
-The door slams open. Tom enters-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
And who might you be?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Im fucking Santa Claus. Who the hell do you think I am? I am Tom, Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott-.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Name is Jack, “The Devilish Tack”, last name is Fogg.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Well, aren’t we a gent?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Your room is A4.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
What?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Your room is A4.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I heard what you said!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Room’s A4.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
You suggesting that I go to my room?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Figured you might be tired, coming from GerMany and all.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Look asshole, I just burned down a goddamn town. And I come in here, and get to hear your damn peanut stories? I aint tired, I aint going to my room, And if you tell me one more goddamn time what the hell I should and should not do, then I aint afraid to blow a fucking hole in that uglyass face of yours!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Alright, Jesus! Do whatever you want!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
That is exactly what I am going to do! Jack, you got some moonshine?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Yes sir, I happen to do!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Then will you be so kind to get me some?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Sure thing, your room number is A4, just in case you where wondering…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Thank you for being so damn kind and what-not…
-Jack pulls out a bottle of moonshine and hands It to Tom. Tom grabs it and walks out. Kane grabs his bag and walks out. Jack puts down his glasses and goes to get ready for bed. The screen goes black and the words, “The Next Day” appear to inform us. We see the building which occupies Rupertmen and Lemmer. Rupertmen walks in while Lemmer is reading some notes-
Officer Lemmer-
How did you sleep?
Officer Rupertmen-
Pretty good, if I say so myself.
Officer Lemmer-
I wish I could say so for the other towns.
Officer Rupertmen-
Why?
Officer Lemmer-
Look at this…
-Lemmer hands Rupertmen a note. Rupertmen skims threw it quick-
Officer Rupertmen-
Wellington was burned down?
Officer Lemmer-
That is what that note says.
Officer Rupertmen-
Who would do something like this?
Officer Lemmer-
Don’t know. Someone claimed that a Man was riding a horse towards this way.
Officer Rupertmen-
Who?
Officer Lemmer-
Some stranger, badly burned, died a few hours after stating that.
Officer Rupertmen-
I might who was riding the horse?
Officer Lemmer-
How the hell am I suppose to know. Could be sleeping in a Inn right here.
Officer Rupertmen-
That would be scary.
Officer Lemmer-
That would be.
-We cut to a desert. The four cowboys are all on horses. Jack is looking at the other three-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Yall had a good nights sleep?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Yes sir.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Slept alright.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Ah… slept better.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Probably karma.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
What the hell did you just say?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Karma, you know… you came in like a total asshole, you got it in return when you had a bed sleep.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Jack, Jude, you where this limey sumbitch?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Please stop fighting, sound like a bunch of dogs.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Shutup Jude, you get to put it to that sweet little gal of yours every night, don’t act like aint got problems.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Don’t you talk about my wife!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Maybe while your off acting like a damn school teacher, Ill go show her a real time!
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Shutup or Ill shoot you and where your boots!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Both of you sumbitchs better Shutup!
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Sorry.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Fine!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Now that you hopefully pulled you heads out of yer asses, let us get on to business. There is four banks in the town where heading to, it’s called Crust’s Cove. It’s a pretty damn big town, we are going to rob these banks. Got it? That’s it. I wanna see what you are made of your, your style, how much you bring, how Many you kill. Got it?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Sounds good.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Alright, I am ready.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
How about you Kane?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Sounds like fun!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
ALRIGHT LET’S GO!
Jack/Kane/Jude/Tom-
YEE-HA!
-Jack, Kane, Jude and Tom begin to ride off. We see a bank. Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg- is entering it. There is 3 people in line, while a Clerk takes there money-
Clerk-
So, a 400 golden piece loan?
Customer #1-
Yes mam, sounds damn good.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
ALRIGHT! THIS IS STICK-UP!
-Jack pulls out a gun. He points at the a Customer wearing a red vest-
Customer #2-
Please sir, your making a bad choice!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
IF YOU MAKE ONE MORE GODDAMN WORD, IM GOING TO BLOW YOUR FACE AWAY!
Customer #2-
I’m just saying…
-Jack shots him in the face. A loud crack can he heard, the Customer falls on the ground as blood drips from the side of his head. The clerk screams and so does the #1 Customer-
Customer #1-
JESUS!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
GIVE ME ALL YOUR GOLD!
-The clerk draws back her red hair and begins to gather all the gold up. The first Customer looks at Jack-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
What the hell are you looking at, jackass?
Customer #1-
Nothing, Nothing.
-The clerk hands him the money, Jack grabs her and begins to kiss her. He lets go and runs out of the front door. He jumps on his horse and begins to ride. We cut to another bank, there are 9 dead people on the ground and two clerks have there heads hanging out a large window, possible dead. There is a Man tied up on the ground, covered in sweat. Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis approaches him holding a hacksaw-
Tied Man-
Why… why? WE GAVE YOU THE MONEY!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
But you see… that’s the problem… you didn’t give me enough money… 78 gold? I think your holding out… this is a awfully large town… and you gave me that? Well, damn… that is sad…
Tied Man-
WE DON’T HAVE ANYMORE!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Is this the cheapest bank in the whole damn county?
Tied Man-
YOU BET YOUR ASS!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Well… shit!
-Kane grabs the Man and starts to hack at his neck. Blood begins to fly into every direction. We see a bigger bank. Jude is holding a woMan with a gun to her head. He looks at everyone-
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
ALRIGHT! I didn’t wake-up in that mood, where I thought, “I think I might kill someone today!” NO! I woke-up in that mood where I thought, “I am going to rob a bank today!”. No killing, but… If you don’t give me your goddamn gold, then… I might kill someone today!
-A sag of money is thrown at him-
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Thank you mam!
-Jack throws the woMan and runs towards his horse. He begins to ride off. We cut to another bank, there is 4 dead customers and 3 dead clerks. Tom is sacking the gold and whistling to himself-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott-- (singing)
And if you give me nine virgins, Well then, I’ll bring you none in return! Because! I am a mad cat-AH!
-We see the shadows of the four men in the desert. We cut back to Inn, A1. All the men are gathered together-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Alright you dirty bastards, let’s see what you got!
-Kane throws down a small sack, he opens it. A small amount of coins fall out-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
What the hell is that?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
78 gold.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Well… that aint shit compared to what I got.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
And how much did you get?
-Tom throws down his sag, a large amount spills out-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
6000 FUCKING GOLD PIECES!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
JESUS CHRIST!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
That would pay off the rent for 2 months!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
You bent your ass!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
How about you Jude?
-Jude throws his sag down, a large amount comes out-
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
About 2,000.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Not bad…
-Jack throws his money down. A medium amount comes out-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
About 600… not much, should’ve picked a better bank.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
So… what we doing tomorrow?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Start are training. Bout 3 weeks or so. Get too know eachother.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Sounds good.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Well, I am going to go get some Shutup. I suggest you do the same.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I think Im gonna go to the local bar.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Im going to the Police Station.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
What?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
The police station.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Why the fuck are you going to the police station?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
See how much the work is. See what they got and they don’t got. You know that the entire county’s richest men dump there gold on this Police Station?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
I knew that. That is the bank where going rob.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Think about all that money…
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
I have thought about it, that’s why your crazy asses are here!
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
I’m going to bed.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Alright, see ya!
-Jude gets up and leaves-
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Me too.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Gonna go get some beer! See ya champ!
-Kane and Tom leave. Jack pulls out a pack of cards and starts shuffling them. We see the Oldstown Bar. The wooden half-doors open as Tom begins his night. A large breasted blonde headed girl is the server. She grabs a large round of drinks and puts them on a plate, she beings to take it around the place handing cups to the Many assortments of people drinking-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Well… THIS is what I am talking about!
-Tom sits down by a scruffy looking cowboy-
Scruffy Cowboy-
What the hell are you doing?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I am sitting.
Scruffy Cowboy-
You do know that is my sit.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Yea, is that your beer?
-Tom grabs a half-drunken glass of beer and drinks it-
Scruffy Cowboy-
You dirty sumbitch!
-The Scruffy Cowboy grabs Tom and throws him across the room. Tom hits the side of a wall. The Scruffy Cowboy grabs a bottle and smashes the tip. He begins to approach Tom. He makes a slash motion but Tom rolls and grabs him from behind. Tom grabs the bottle and slits the Cowboy’s throat. Blood runs down. Tom throws him on the ground. Everyone just stares at him-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
What the hell are you sumbitchs looking at? Get back to your beers!
-Everyone returns to what they where doing. The server comes up to him-
Server-
That was quit a show you pulled off. I also wanted to do that to that son of a bitch since he started coming a few weeks ago.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Yea, he sounded like a asshole.
Server-
You new in town?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Just coming for a little bit. Quick trip.
Server-
You got a house?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I got a Inn room.
Server-
Don’t mind if I stop buy for a bit after my job?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Well… I got a wife back in GerMany.
Server-
Well, then you take care…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
WAIT!
Server-
Yes?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I didn’t say you still couldn’t come over…
-The Server gives him a look and drops a glass by him. He grabs it and takes a swig. We cut to the Police Station again-
Officer Lemmer-
Four banks. At least three dozen where killed. Who could do this? Four Cowboys. They must be the sorriest sons of a bitches out there.
Officer Rupertmen-
Yea, would have to be.
Officer Lemmer-
Remember 10 years ago… when we where kids…
Officer Rupertmen-
Yea! What happened to those days?
Officer Lemmer-
Everything got darker…
Officer Rupertmen-
Rape, Murder… it all seemed like catching mustached men who stole a sag of money… I liked it when I thought it was going to be like that… |
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Officer Lemmer-
Those where some of the best days of are life…
Officer Rupertmen-
True…. Very true.
Officer Lemmer-
Well… I’m going to my house. Take care.
Officer Rupertmen-
You also.
Officer Lemmer-
Night.
-Lemmer walks out and gets on his horse, he passes another Man riding a horse and he waves. Kane walks in-
Officer Rupertmen-
May I help you?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Um… is this the police station?
Officer Rupertmen-
Yes sir.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
I was wondering…
Officer Rupertmen-
Don’t be shy!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Well… I just moved in and all… does the local bank have tight security?
Officer Rupertmen-
Not planning anything… are you?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
No!
Officer Rupertmen-
Im just pulling your leg!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Well… I have a lot of Money… and I was wondering if the bank could protect it?
Officer Rupertmen-
Look son, the bank has eight of the finest officers, and myself and Officer Lemmer. There is nothing going to rob or harm anything in that Bank there! It’s safe, don’t you worry!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Alright… thank you.
Officer Rupertmen-
And if you have any questions, don’t feel free to ask me or Lemmer… that is what where here for… to protect you and the fine guys and gals of this here town!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Thank you… being kind and all.
Officer Rupertmen-
Just my job!
-Kane walks out of the room. We cut back to that bar. Tom is sitting in his chair with at least a dozen of glasses empty. The server is sitting on his lap. He is whispering in her ear-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Why don’t you came back to the Inn with me… I could show you a damn good time…
Server-
I don’t know… seems a little odd not knowing you in all…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Hay baby… your going to love it…
Server-
If you meant what you told me…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
About being the only one?
Server-
Yes…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
You bet your sweet ass!
Server- (laughing)
Alright, Alright!
-Tom grabs her and they walk out of the bar. Kane is out there waiting-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
What’s up Kane?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Jack said you aint suppose to bring any girls.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
He never did say that, you’re a goddamn liar!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
How bout a beat your ass?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
What the fuck is wrong with you?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
I had a idea…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
And what would that be?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Well… you said you came from GerMany, right?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Yes I did.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Well…. What if you aren’t who you say you are, just using Jack for a home till we sleep… then you kill us?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Boy…. You have said some dumb things before… but this? I should smash you little Spanish face in right now!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Scott-
Look… you sumbitch!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Kane, go in there… have a drink, you like look you need a drink…
-Kane spits on Tom’s coat. Tom looks at it. He grabs Kane and starts choking him. The Server trys pulling Tom off of him-
Server-
DAMNIT!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Not so damn cocky now huh?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Scott-
ALRIGHT! ALRIGHT!
-Tom lets go and he and the server walk off. Kane gets up and whips the dirt off of his coat. He walks off. We cut back to the Inn. We see Jude in bed with Bella. There are laying down looking at eachother-
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Me… and three other guys… robbing a bank…
Bella Rumon-
You think after you pull it of… maybe… maybe you could retire?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
It all depends on how much money we pull in…
Bella Rumon-
How much do you think?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
I reckon around 10 grand….
Bella Rumon-
WOW! That good really payoff…
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
I bet it would. I gotta go get ready for training.
Bella Rumon-
Isn’t it exciting?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
What?
Bella Rumon-
Where finally away from your Dad, all those bad memories… and your being hired to do a real job!
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon
And if we make even more then this…. Then it will definitely be the last job…
Bella Rumon-
I love you Jude…
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
… I love you too!
-Bella and Jude give eachother a very long and passionate kiss. Jude gets up and grabs his clothes. We see Tom waking up by the Server-
Server-
That was good…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Yea… you where all right…
Server-
So, wanna go get some breakfast?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
How about you getting the hell out of here and never coming back?
Server-
Your joking right?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
There are three things women are good for… sex, bringing drinks and being a pain in the ass, now get out of here before I shoot you!
Server-
Stop it!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Look your whore… I am asking you one more goddamn to leave!
Server-
What is wrong with you?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
THAT IS IT!
-We see the door of A4. Jude walks by it and a loud noise can be heard followed by a scream and a slashing noise. Jude turns around he knocks on the door-
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Is everything alright in there?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott-- (from door)
YEA! WE GOT A DEAD BITCH IN HERE!
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Jesus Christ…
-Jude walks off. The Inn Manager comes up-
Inn Manager-
What in tar-nations is going on here?
-Tom opens the door and pulls her in the room. The door slams shut, s gunfire goes off. We cut to “A Few Minutes Later”. Jack is in Tom’s room. The Server is on the bed, covered in blood. There is a bullet wound on her left breast and a slit on her throat. The Inn Manager has a hole in the back of her head and she is on the floor-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Alright, Tom?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
That Server wanted all these promises and stuff…
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
And did you live up to them?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I told her it was just pillow-talk…
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
And the Manager?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
She would of run off and told the officers!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
I am glad that you did take care of her in time…but… this is VERY STUPID! You killed the Manager? This Manager is actually a very respected MOTHER! A MOTHER!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Well, shit… I didn’t know at the time!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Damnit Tom! Your costing us too much.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Well… what should be do?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Well, you and me are going to go bury these bodies.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Right.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Go grab some cloth, wrap them up, be back in five.
-Jack walks out and closes the door behind him-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott-- (laughing)
Funny shit…
-The station. Officer Lemmer and Officer Rupertmen are both sitting on the front porch drinking glasses of milk-
Officer Lemmer-
So… your telling me that it is better for a Man to go to Jail then get shot?
Officer Rupertmen-
Yes.
Officer Lemmer-
Could you explain this?
Officer Rupertmen-
Well, getting shot is a pain. IF your lucky enough to NOT get shot in the chest, then your more then likely damn well going to live. It may be a HELL, and when I say “hell”, I mean A LIVING HELL! But… after a few days, your going to be fine.
Officer Lemmer-
And Jail?
Officer Rupertmen-
Well, if your in Jail; that is a different situation. In Jail, there is no way yer going to get out. And you might have other prisoners who will damn well beat yer ass, In Jail; there aint no going in a few days, getting out in a few days. NO! There is a possible of 2 to 8 years, even more!
Officer Lemmer-
Well… you do make a valid point.
Officer Rupertmen-
I know! And remember, I tell the ol’ sheriff that every week!
Officer Lemmer-
Every week?
Officer Rupertmen-
Yep, every week!
Officer Lemmer-
And what does he say?
Officer Rupertmen-
He says, and I quote: “Ya make a valid point son! And I will take it into consideration!”. That’s where it ends, till I remind him. But no, let’s forget about punishing them by locking them up for a couple years; let’s just blast em in half!
Officer Lemmer-
Aw hell, the sheriff is a lazy sumbitch.
Officer Rupertmen-
I know!
Officer Lemmer-
He just sits in his “office” giving other people paper-work. The only time he leaves the place is to go get a payroll; it is flat out stupid!
Officer Rupertmen-
Did I tell you about this creepy guy that came in the other day?
Officer Lemmer-
Nope.
Officer Rupertmen-
Yes, he looked he Spanish or Mexican; something like that. Came in with this dusty outfit. Asked if the big bank had any security?
Officer Lemmer-
Sounds damn suspicious.
Officer Rupertmen-
He was all nervous and stuff. Looked scared to ask. I told him that it had eight of our finest officers and you and myself.
Officer Lemmer-
Yea… you heard about that train down a few miles away from here?
Officer Rupertmen-
No…
Officer Lemmer-
Well, apparently there is a robbery on this train. The driver came out and got shot, money taken and all.
Officer Rupertmen-
That’s a little odd…
Officer Lemmer-
Well, there was a gun blast in one of the carts. Probably some cowboy fired a blast, alerted the driver and killed him. Case solved.
Officer Rupertmen-
That seems like a little too much effort for a train driver, they don’t get that great of pay.
Officer Lemmer-
Yea… I’ll have to think about that.
Officer Rupertmen-
Well, I gotta go give Miss Manning her pay.
Officer Lemmer-
She still running that inn?
Officer Rupertmen-
Yes, real kind lady, got a few kids.
Officer Lemmer-
Well, don’t keep me waiting
Officer Rupertmen- (laughing)
Alright, god bless!
Officer Lemmer-
You also!
-Officer Rupertmen gets up as Lemmer pats him on the back. Rupertmen mounts his horse and rides off. We return to the Inn. Tom has the bodies all wrapped up. Jack walks in-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Alright, you got them wrapped?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Yep, all ready to go.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
So, here’s the plan. Where going to carrying them on the horse for a few miles, until we get away from sight. Then, where going to tie them to the bag of the horses, drag them to the desert, find a good spot and then burry them. Return, and have some drinks.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Sounds like a great plan Man.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Yea, but where taking out some of your cut.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
What the fuck did you just say?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Im reducing some of your payroll cut from the robbery.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Wha…. Why?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
You just killed two people! You killed a drink server and a Manager of a Inn, she was a mother! Had kids!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I promise not to do it again, I didn’t mean too!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Look at you! Sounding like a child pleading not to get a whippin!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Damnit! AW FUCK!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Shut the hell up you shack of shit!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
GODDAMNIT!
-Jack slaps him. Tom makes a kicking motion and walks back. He grabs a green blanket violently and double wraps the bodies. A loud knocking noise can be heard. We cut to the front door which Rupertmen is outsiding knocking. Jude runs down stairs and looks. He runs back up to Jack-
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Um… Jack… we got an officer here!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Jesus Christ… Tom: You keep wrapping, Jude: stay quiet.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Yes sir!
-Tom makes a grunt noise. Jude walks off and we can here a door shutting. We cut to that room. Jude is with Bella. She is in a black and green torn dress-
Bella Rumon-
What is going on?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Tom killed the Inn Manager and a drink server.
Bella Rumon-
What?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
And now a officer is here…
Bella Rumon-
You have to be kidding me!
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Baby, I wish I was!
Bella Rumon-
How do you converse with these blood thirsty men, little alone work with them!
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
I honestly have no idea!
Bella Rumon-
Are they going to kill that officer?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
I don’t know baby, I don’t know… just be quiet please…and… and stay with me.
-Bella hugs Jude, they begin to kiss. We cut to the front door again. Jack opens it-
Officer Rupertmen-
Is Miss Manning here?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Let me check…
Officer Rupertmen-
Um… who are you?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
My name is Jack Fogg.
Officer Rupertmen-
Alright, are you a new boy friend of Miss Manning?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Yes I am.
Officer Rupertmen-
Well it’s a good thing that she finally found someone… after her husband got shot and everything…
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Yes, Yes it is.
-Jack shuts the door for a second. He returns within a minute-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
She happens not to be here right now. What business do you have with her?
Officer Rupertmen-
It’s her pay.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Well, if you want… you could give it to me and then I’ll drop it off when she returns…
Officer Rupertmen-
Can I trust you?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
I believe so.
Officer Rupertmen-
Alright, I thank you.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
May the god lord smile upon you!
Officer Rupertmen-
And you aswell.
-Rupertmen hands him a sack of gold and then walks off, he mounts his horse and rides off. Jack goes up stairs-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg-- (yelling)
IT’S CLEAR EVERYBODY!
-Jude, Tom and Kane come out-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg-- (yelling)
We have 2 weeks and 5 days until we rob that bank. And all you have been doing is getting drunk, sucking-up to your wife and acting creepy. It’s about time that we get this show on the road. Who’s ready to learn some real moves!
Jude & Tom & Kane-
I!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
About time Goddamnit!
-We see the sun, rising-
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon-- (VO)
There is four of us. Four cowboys. One is from America. One is GerMany. One is from Britain. One is from Spain. One wants to rob a bank. One wants to have no morals. One wants to found a home for a wife. One wants freedom in this country. One is The Devilish Tack. One is The Fiery Bomb. On is The Evil Mood. One is The Demonic Pain. Some are friends. Some are enemies. But in the end… it doesn’t matter. There all Blood Thirsty. They all are willing to kill someone, which is wrong… no matter what. They think that little back up stories can save them. Save there souls, lend them to heaven. But there wrong. They have a little less then 3 weeks until they rob one of the biggest banks in the country. They think that will be plenty of time to get ready for it. They are wrong. It’s not that can’t do it. It’s just… they wont be able to. A team with them would never work. There all going to die. If there not shot, there still dead. They where dead the second they came out of the womb. You can have a sorrowing back-story that might be an excuse for your crimes. But no-one gives a shit. Your still a killer. A Man pointing a gun at another Man with the attention of shooting him. Killing him. What kind of Man could do that? Not a sane Man. Never a sane Man. This is it.
-A slow song begins to play. We see Jack instructing Jude how to wield a rifle with a glass piece attached to it on a cliff in the middle of a dusty desert. Overview is the bank-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Now, move It a little to the left, there… you got yourself a perfect cheap sniper.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
That is really something.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Now, I think there is a guard who sits in the left chair across the side window. He is the one you snip, it gets the other’s attention. Makes ‘em either duck or run outside.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Then what?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Kane should run in there and begin to open fire. Followed by Tom who is going to deal with the hostages.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Alright, sounds good.
-We cut to Kane and Tom sitting by eachother. There sitting on a bench in the middle of town looking at the front door of that bank-
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Alright. After Jude snips the first cop. I’ll go in.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
And you’ll get the rest of the cops.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Yes. Then you’ll enter…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
… And I’ll take the hostages. Grab the women and possible children. Kill the men.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Correct. Now let’s hope that your sober enough to hold the damn pistol.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Are you saying that I got a problem?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
I’m just saying that you’re a dick.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
You really know how to charm up everything, what would God think of you?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
God?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Did I stutter?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
God has nothing to say.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Are you saying that you don’t believe in the lord ol’ mighty?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Look who turned into a catholic schoolboy, pissed of because I don’t believe in that sack of shit while you go off and kill woMan for god’s sake… you killed a mother…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I can ask for forgiveness. You can’t. Your going to burn in hell.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
I don’t give a damn what you say. You a asshole. Just another low-life sumbitch who thinks they go do whatever they want because they got there dick hanging out and pointing to the nearest Church.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I should blast you in half right now.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
But you wont. You already on Jack’s bad side.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
You write this on your head with your own blood: Jack just saved your life.
-Tom gets up and walks off. Kane grabs a small can beside him. It has water in it. He begins to drink. We cut to the Inn. Kane is sitting in his room. He is holding a piece of paper-
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis- (VO)
There is this bank. A big bank. All of the richest men come to this bank to drop of there stuff because the town is small, never had a robbery for 20 years. Cowboys don’t have the balls to rob this bank. We don’t either. We have a team. That is what they all needed a team. But I think to myself… Is this a team? Some of us hate eachother, others are friends. I ask myself this every day. Will we come out of the smoke with sacks of gold? Or are we going to come out of it holding each other’s dieing arms. It’s a tough thought. There is 5 more days till this bank robbery. We been sitting here just talking over it, we know it by heart. But do we know eachother? Only time will tell, and… we don’t have much time.
-We move to the next room. Jude is sitting by Bella. He is under the covers. She is in a night dress-
Bella Rumon-
It’s 3 days away.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Yes… yes it is.
Bella Rumon-
Remember when we jumped the boat?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Yes… I remember that.
Bella Rumon-
I was so afraid. I just screamed “I cant!”, but then… you turned around and told me that..
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Don’t be afraid. As long as I am holding your hand, nothing will ever harm you.
Bella Rumon-
You where never like other men. Other men thought that since I was a woMan, I couldn’t help them. You let me go with you, to the America. No other Man would have done that. Ever since I first laid eyes on you… I knew that you where going to be my sweet. Always.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Yes. The same with you. You didn’t care that I was a bad Man; you loved me for who I was… not for what I do. You’re the perfect woMan.
Bella Rumon-
And you’re the perfect Man.
-Bella drops his dress. We see from her back. She gets into the bed. Jude begins to kiss her on the neck as her head tilts forward. We cut to Jude rubbing against her. Sweat dripping from Bella’s forehead. Her eyes flutter. We cut to Jack. He is loading his guns-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg-- (VO)
Today is the day. We have been training for this sumbitch for 2 weeks, if you can call that training. This is it. We either walk out with enough gold to live are lives. Or we lay on the ground dead.
-We see the building again. Lemmer and Rupertmen are each holding a glass of beer-
Officer Lemmer-
Well, the sun is up.
Officer Rupertmen-
About damn time. Thought it was going to be Night for the rest of the day.
Officer Lemmer-
What you doing today?
Officer Rupertmen-
Well, gotta go give Miss Manning here pay.
Officer Lemmer-
Didn’t you say she got herself a new Man?
Officer Rupertmen-
Yes sir. She wasn’t there although. Well, come to think of it… I haven’t seen here for a long time. Where the hell do you think she went?
Officer Lemmer-
Went, you saying she left?
Officer Rupertmen-
Well, she aint normally gone this long unless she leaves town and she would say so if she was…
Officer Lemmer-
Might want to go check that Inn again…
Officer Rupertmen-
You suspecting some foul-play?
Officer Lemmer-
Never hurts to be too worried.
Officer Rupertmen-
Alright, I’ll go check.
Officer Lemmer-
See you in a little bit.
-Rupertmen walks out of the front door. He gets on his horse and begins to ride off. He approaches the Inn. He enters-
Officer Rupertmen-
Anyone home?
-We looks around the front desk. He turns around and walks up the stairs. He knocks on the doors, not getting a answer. He walks around for a little bit. He walks toward a room that has the label of “Closet”. He opens it. Two green sags fall out-
Officer Rupertmen-
What the hell could this be?
-We opens the first. There is a young server girl with a slit on her throat. Her skin is pale and there is bugs crawling on her-
Officer Rupertmen-
GODDAMN!
-He opens the other. Manning’s corpse falls out with a hole in the bug of her head-
Officer Rupertmen-
Oh… Oh god…
-He begins to throw up. A door behind him opens. Tom walks out. He turns around begins to look at Rupertmen. He walks forward with a big smile. We cut to Kane. He is loading a rifle. He grabs a rag and whips the sweat off his head. He hears laughter. He gets on his bed and lays down. We cut to another room. Rupertmen is tied up. Tom is looking at him-
Officer Rupertmen-
YOU SICK FUCK!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Pissin ya off, aint I?
Officer Rupertmen-
How could you kill them?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
There is this thing called a trigger. You pull this trigger and a blast comes out of the barrel. It shots what you want to die… and then it kills it.
Officer Rupertmen-
You’re an animal!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
No… I’m a Fiery Bomb.
Officer Rupertmen-
What are you gonna do to me?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I’m gonna tear your head off. Wear it around my neck, as a prize.
Officer Rupertmen-
If you dare even touch me… you’ll burn in hell!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Always good to kill a Church Man, makes me feel better…
Officer Rupertmen-
Dear God, I want you to save me… I love you and I have yet to sin, forgive me and my humble words…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
You can keep praying… it wont stop anything…
-Tom grabs a blade. He makes a slashing motion. Blood squirts on his face. Jack walks in-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
What the hell have you done now?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Some asshole thought he could walk in and mop around…
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
You just killed an Officer…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
What?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
You killed Harold Rupertmen, a local officer. He has been on the force for 10 years. He is a hero. You… killed… a fucking hero!
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
What are you talking about?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
You killed a Man who has saved dozens, what is wrong with you?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Aw hell, I had no idea…
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Tom. Just go get ready. We don’t have time for a clean up. Jude is already waiting and I am sure Kane is sitting infront of that bank waiting for the sign. Go…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Jack…
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
I SAID GO GODDAMNIT!
-Tom runs out of the front door. Jack begins to smile. He grabs a brown-sag and then grabs Rupertmen’s head. He puts it in the sag and walks out of the front door. We see Jude on a cliff. Bella is on a horse looking at him-
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Remember the plan?
Bella Rumon-
Yes.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Tell me it.
Bella Rumon-
Your going to do this robbery and met me at the San’s coast.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Remember where that is?
Bella Rumon-
Yes. Down west, big town.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Good. And if I aint there in a few hours then-
Bella Rumon-
Don’t. Don’t say it.
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
I’ll see you.
-Jude kisses Bella on the cheek. She runs off. We cut to Kane sitting on a bench looking at the bank. He has his hand on his hostler. He turns around to see Tom holding a rifle and a sack. We cut back to the hotel. Officer Lemmer is walking in-
Officer Lemmer-
Rupertmen, you still here?
-He walks up the stairs. He sees the two bodies-
Officer Lemmer-
Jesus…
-He hears a thump noise. He pulls out a pistol real quick. He opens the first door. Nothing. He opens the second, just some clothes on the ground. He opens the third-
Officer Lemmer-
GODDAMN!
-He falls on his knees and begins to cry. Rupertmen’s headless body is on the floor across from him. He wipes his tears. His face begins to go red. He loads his pistol and storms off the front door. He gets on his horse and starts riding off-
Officer Lemmer-
Whoever did this is gonna pay… there gonna pay big.
-We see the bank. Jack is a few feet behind Tom. He begins to sweat. He looks at the cliff. Jude is laying down holding the rifle. Tom looks at Jack. They both nod. Kane turns around and nods. Jude begins to look threw his rifle. He sees a guard standing by a window. Jude slowly puts his finger on the trigger. He pulls it. A loud blast goes off. The bullet crashes threw the window and smacks against the Guard’s head. Blood shoots out the other end and he falls down. A woMan in the bank screams. Kane jumps toward the door. He smashes it open. A guard looks straight at him, he pulls out his pistol and fires three times. The first bullet hits him in the chest, knocking him back. The second smashes into his throat then a third goes threw his eye. We cut to Tom. He dashes toward the building. He sees that there are 3 hostages. 1 is a woMan, the other two are men. He grabs one of the men and begins to press his fingers into the Man’s eyes. Blood begins to gush out. A guard behind him shots Tom in the shoulder. Tom falls down. Kane turns around and shots guard-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
AWW FUCK!
-One of the men grab Kane and try to hold him. Jack walks in and pulls out his rifle. He shots the Man in the forehead. The other Man begins to run for it. It is too late. He escapes-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Damnit, he got away!
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Screw it, we don’t have much time! Get the money!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
ALRIGHT! ALRIGHT!
-Jack pulls out a sack and starts to bag the money up-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Who the hell made you boss?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
What?
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I said… who the hell made you boss?
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
We don’t have much time for arguments.
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
Shutup you goddamn asshole…
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
That is it you sumbitch…
-Kane pulls his gun out. Tom quickly grabs his rifle and points it at him, Kane does the same-
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Jesus…
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
Look… I have had it with you…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
You cant kill a GerMan without him killing you first…
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
I’d like to see you make that true.
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Put the guns down…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
This aint yer business Jack!
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
This is my team.
Kane “The Demonic Pain” Lewis-
You call this a team?
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
I have had enough of your bitching!
-Jack pulls out his rifle. He shots Kane in the head. Kane falls dead to the ground-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
You killed him…
Jack “The Devilish Tack” Fogg--
Yea… I di----
-Jude walks in holding two pistols. He begins to open fire upon Jack. Jack falls to the ground dead. Tom quickly pulls up his rifle and shoots Jude in the leg, Jude falls to the ground-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
What the hell is wrong with you?
Jude “The Evil Mood” Rumon--
Sorry Tom… I needed that money…
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
You dead sumbitch!
-Tom gets up. He grabs his rifle and looks at Jude in pain. He pulls out a knife-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I thought about shooting you… I did, but I thought… I sumbitch like you needs a bloody death… one to remember…
-Tom grabs Jude and slits his throat. Blood rushes down Jude’s shirt-
Tom “The Fiery Bomb” Scott--
I’ll tell a story about your death… ever time I kill someone.
-Tom begins to walk out of the front door. Then Officer Lemmer comes up on horseback and fires at Tom. A blast of blood shots out of his chest. Lemmer then runs back off, his face is red. The final shot is of Lemmer running threw the town. We zoom to a box that reads “Officer’s mail dropbox”. Rupertmen’s head lays there-
The End
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