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Post by 16thhour on Jul 23, 2008 19:58:09 GMT -5
FADE IN:
Thousands of houses come into view. It is a normal August day. The setting is a Suburban neighboorhood. The grasses are green, the joggers are jogging, and the sun is shinning.
We see a newspaper boy delivering papers. The camera zooms in on him and we follown him down the street.
He throws papers on drive ways. And he chucks one over some bushes and we follow the news paper as it hits a red door.
We cut to a woman making a sandwhich. She heads toward the door, just as the phone rings. She awsners.
WOMAN: Hello?
MAN: Hi misses lindon, I am from Heavens Life insurance and I'm calling to see...
The woman cuts him off.
WOMAN: I'm sorry I'm not interested with what ever your trying to sell, GoodB-
The man interrups.
MAN: If you hang up the phone I will kill come to your house and slit your fucking throat.
BEAT:
CUT TO a man walking up to a house.
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CUT TO a man sitting down with a family, pulling out a knife set.
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CUT TO a man leaving and walking down the sidewalk with fading bloddy footprints.
BEAT..The man stops and looks around at the houses.
MAN: Sometimes we must all buy something. Even if it is our own life.
BEAT
BASED ON A TRUE STORY
BEAT
A Film by C.S. ASKEW
BEAT
CUT TO a woman opening a door, a man with a buisness suite smiles.
MAN: How are you doing today? I have a product I think you cant live with out.
FADE OUT
10 Sales in Suburbia (TITLE)
12/10/2008
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Post by Hanelle on Jul 23, 2008 22:51:21 GMT -5
That was an awesome trailer. Very cool concept as well. This will be written I'm guessing, right?
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Post by Jester- PsychoBunnyProductions on Jul 24, 2008 8:13:50 GMT -5
wow.... i like it a lot. True story? Whats it based on?
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Post by iamthebatman on Jul 24, 2008 16:26:12 GMT -5
That's awesome.
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Post by 16thhour on Jul 24, 2008 17:14:58 GMT -5
thank you, thank you.
It is based off the true story of a man who went door to door one day and killed people. He was a salesman who was fired do to poor performance. It happened in Virginia. 10 People where killed.
I am of course altering the story a little to give it movie presence. I have yet to decide whether I will be writing this or shooting this. That decesion will come in later months.
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