Post by 16thhour on Aug 5, 2008 13:08:26 GMT -5
FADE IN:
It's been 1003 years after the real World War. A new world order has been established. The world is ruled by only one man.
EXT. OLD, NEW YORK - AFTERNOON
We see old, New York lying in ruins from ancient bomb blasts. An old Hilton Hotel is the last building standing. Its crooked appearance and huge gaping holes where steel and glass should be. Makes it an ominous reminder of the past. This city knows not of justice and liberty.
EXT. FORSHADEN - AFTERNOON
Just across the river from old New York is Forshaden (new, New york). It is a vast city. There are only four massive buildings rocketing up into the sky. Road ways wrap around them like present bows. This city is home to over 10 million people. Its a busy city on a normal afternoon.
Non flying hydrogen powered cars zoom at amazing speeds on the road ways. 5 decker busses pick up and drop of thousands of people. The only calm area of this city is the massive park in between the four towers. Green fields and lakes make this sight, look like heaven. A white tower stands in the middle of the park.
The monitor is black and has always been black. It was made to bring world terror alerts. Such alerts have never come.
Without any warning the monitor flickers on. A siren echoes loudly thorughout the city. Monitors in peoples cars, homes, and businesses all turn on too.
Traffic stops. Citizens gaze at their monitors, with suspicion. Nothing moves. The city is silent.
A man pops on the screen. He looks like a used car sales man. He looks out at the crowd and smiles oddly big.
The man leans forward.
The people look around. They are nervous. they should be.
He dances a bit.
The city vibrates with chatter. Huge ships land in the city. Thousands of soldiers pour out, and thousands of soldiers swarm in from above on jet packs.
The monitor goes blank. A timer replaces it. The crowd goes hysterical. People scream and run through the streets. The soldiers shoot their guns in the air. The chaos is now real.
9 MINUTES
People crowd the streets tearing random citizens to the ground and almost crowd surfing them to the soldiers. Everyone is turning on each other.
Cars mow down crowds of fleeing people in the streets without mercy. People squeez onto the narrow sidewalks, trying to stay off the roads.
A man takes a trun down an alley way and sprints. He reaches a corner and looks around. No cars in sight. He steps onto the road and gets hit by a massive bus. A crescendo of screams goes by.
8 MINUTES
Just across the street we find man looking out an apartment window. He has black silky hair and is skinny. His name is Savorian he is 35. He is the leader of the Shadowed Society. A society who's main goal is to take Kainen out of power. They are the so-called traitors.
INT. APARTMENT - AFTERNOON
The apartment is old but modern to us.
Savorian takes a deep breath and turns around to face three others. Drake, Lizzia, and Fenus.
FENUS, 23, blonde hair and skinny. LIZZIA, 25, brown Hair, physcially fit. Sit at a desk pounding away furiously on futuristic laptops. Lizzia looks up.
Hopefull Savorian Looks back out the window upon the fleeing citzens.
Lizzia and fenus both look up and shake there head no.
7 MINUTES
CUT TO: Huge crowds of people start rushing the sodliers.
CUT TO: Un-Imaginable traffic. Citizens stampeding over cars.
6 MINTUES
CUT TO: Savorian pounding on the desk near fenus and Lizzia.
CUT TO: Soldiers shooting random citizens and laughing.
5 MINUTES
CUT TO: crowds of people leaping off roadways to the levels below. Its useless no one can survive the fall.
4 MINUTES
CUT TO: Savorian dragging lizza and fenus away from their laptops.
CUT TO: Fenus screaming at Savorian and runing back to his laptop.
3 MINUTES:
CUT TO: Lizzia and Savorian in the ship with drake about to take off in the sewer pipes.
CUT TO: People now getting pushed off road ways. A waterfall of people pour non-stop.
2 MINUTES
CUT TO: The ship in the sewer takes off and flys through the narrow pipes.
CUT TO: Fenus pounding furiusly at his laptop.
1 MINUTE
CUT TO: The monitor in the park. The screens break off and a green lights starts getting bigger and bigger from inside.
CUT TO: Citizens crying hysterically and giving up. Famlies hold each other.
30 SECONDS
CUT TO: The soldiers flying back out of the city leaving the citizens behind.
INT. APARTMENT - AFTERNOON
Time runs out. Fenus tear stricken throws his laptop at the wall. The monitor implodes and a green fire wall swoops down and heads to the buildings. Metal roadways get torn off the ground as cars and building hurtle down the street straight for Fenus. He looks up and dives under a desk.
CUT TO:
INT. SEWER - AFTERNOON
The ship skims against the walls causing sparks to fly. Savorian look back to find a green light in the sewer. The fireball rushes toward them.
EXT. VALLEY - AFTERNOON
The ship shoots out the sewer at the side of a cliff. The ship crashes in deep wet sediment.
CUT TO:
EXT. FORSHADEN - AFTERNOON
Forshaden is now a pile molten steel. No bodies. No survivors. A pile of rubble burns a blaze. A small teddy bear lies half burnt.
CUT TO:
INT. SHIP - AFTERNOON
Savorian stirs. He looks at Lizzia and Drake they are knocked out cold. He tries to move but he is pinned to his seat. A steel bar is shoved through his neck and wrapped around his collar bone. In pain he looks to his side. He sees a window.
His face is overrun by terror.
They are in a river valley.
It's high tide and the water is rising.
[glow=red,2,300]The Shadowed[/glow]---COMING SOON
It's been 1003 years after the real World War. A new world order has been established. The world is ruled by only one man.
EXT. OLD, NEW YORK - AFTERNOON
We see old, New York lying in ruins from ancient bomb blasts. An old Hilton Hotel is the last building standing. Its crooked appearance and huge gaping holes where steel and glass should be. Makes it an ominous reminder of the past. This city knows not of justice and liberty.
EXT. FORSHADEN - AFTERNOON
Just across the river from old New York is Forshaden (new, New york). It is a vast city. There are only four massive buildings rocketing up into the sky. Road ways wrap around them like present bows. This city is home to over 10 million people. Its a busy city on a normal afternoon.
Non flying hydrogen powered cars zoom at amazing speeds on the road ways. 5 decker busses pick up and drop of thousands of people. The only calm area of this city is the massive park in between the four towers. Green fields and lakes make this sight, look like heaven. A white tower stands in the middle of the park.
The monitor is black and has always been black. It was made to bring world terror alerts. Such alerts have never come.
Without any warning the monitor flickers on. A siren echoes loudly thorughout the city. Monitors in peoples cars, homes, and businesses all turn on too.
Traffic stops. Citizens gaze at their monitors, with suspicion. Nothing moves. The city is silent.
A man pops on the screen. He looks like a used car sales man. He looks out at the crowd and smiles oddly big.
MONITOR
People of Forshaden, do I have a deal for you!!
The man leans forward.
MONITOR
There are traitors among you...(beat) Destroyers of peace.
The people look around. They are nervous. they should be.
MONITOR
Now for a limited time offer you can turn them in and end their crusade against are beloved leader KAINEN.
He dances a bit.
MONITOR
If they are not turned in then ...OH BOY! Do I have a surprise for you. You have 10 mintues, I SAY 10 minutes to turn over these traitors to the soldiers or you will get a makeover like our close friend old New York.
The city vibrates with chatter. Huge ships land in the city. Thousands of soldiers pour out, and thousands of soldiers swarm in from above on jet packs.
MONITOR
Do we have a deal? GOOD! (cynical smile) Happy Hunting!
The monitor goes blank. A timer replaces it. The crowd goes hysterical. People scream and run through the streets. The soldiers shoot their guns in the air. The chaos is now real.
9 MINUTES
People crowd the streets tearing random citizens to the ground and almost crowd surfing them to the soldiers. Everyone is turning on each other.
Cars mow down crowds of fleeing people in the streets without mercy. People squeez onto the narrow sidewalks, trying to stay off the roads.
A man takes a trun down an alley way and sprints. He reaches a corner and looks around. No cars in sight. He steps onto the road and gets hit by a massive bus. A crescendo of screams goes by.
8 MINUTES
Just across the street we find man looking out an apartment window. He has black silky hair and is skinny. His name is Savorian he is 35. He is the leader of the Shadowed Society. A society who's main goal is to take Kainen out of power. They are the so-called traitors.
INT. APARTMENT - AFTERNOON
The apartment is old but modern to us.
Savorian takes a deep breath and turns around to face three others. Drake, Lizzia, and Fenus.
SAVORIAN
He knows we're here.
FENUS, 23, blonde hair and skinny. LIZZIA, 25, brown Hair, physcially fit. Sit at a desk pounding away furiously on futuristic laptops. Lizzia looks up.
LIZZIA
The bomb has been activated. We have less than 8 minutes..
Hopefull Savorian Looks back out the window upon the fleeing citzens.
SAVORIAN
Can you stop it?
Lizzia and fenus both look up and shake there head no.
7 MINUTES
CUT TO: Huge crowds of people start rushing the sodliers.
CUT TO: Un-Imaginable traffic. Citizens stampeding over cars.
6 MINTUES
CUT TO: Savorian pounding on the desk near fenus and Lizzia.
CUT TO: Soldiers shooting random citizens and laughing.
5 MINUTES
CUT TO: crowds of people leaping off roadways to the levels below. Its useless no one can survive the fall.
4 MINUTES
CUT TO: Savorian dragging lizza and fenus away from their laptops.
CUT TO: Fenus screaming at Savorian and runing back to his laptop.
3 MINUTES:
CUT TO: Lizzia and Savorian in the ship with drake about to take off in the sewer pipes.
CUT TO: People now getting pushed off road ways. A waterfall of people pour non-stop.
2 MINUTES
CUT TO: The ship in the sewer takes off and flys through the narrow pipes.
CUT TO: Fenus pounding furiusly at his laptop.
1 MINUTE
CUT TO: The monitor in the park. The screens break off and a green lights starts getting bigger and bigger from inside.
CUT TO: Citizens crying hysterically and giving up. Famlies hold each other.
30 SECONDS
CUT TO: The soldiers flying back out of the city leaving the citizens behind.
INT. APARTMENT - AFTERNOON
Time runs out. Fenus tear stricken throws his laptop at the wall. The monitor implodes and a green fire wall swoops down and heads to the buildings. Metal roadways get torn off the ground as cars and building hurtle down the street straight for Fenus. He looks up and dives under a desk.
CUT TO:
INT. SEWER - AFTERNOON
The ship skims against the walls causing sparks to fly. Savorian look back to find a green light in the sewer. The fireball rushes toward them.
DRAKE
HOLD ON!!
EXT. VALLEY - AFTERNOON
The ship shoots out the sewer at the side of a cliff. The ship crashes in deep wet sediment.
CUT TO:
EXT. FORSHADEN - AFTERNOON
Forshaden is now a pile molten steel. No bodies. No survivors. A pile of rubble burns a blaze. A small teddy bear lies half burnt.
CUT TO:
INT. SHIP - AFTERNOON
Savorian stirs. He looks at Lizzia and Drake they are knocked out cold. He tries to move but he is pinned to his seat. A steel bar is shoved through his neck and wrapped around his collar bone. In pain he looks to his side. He sees a window.
His face is overrun by terror.
They are in a river valley.
It's high tide and the water is rising.
FADE OUT
[glow=red,2,300]The Shadowed[/glow]---COMING SOON
