Post by Dale on Aug 16, 2009 10:31:56 GMT -5
I didn't feel like filming a review, so I'll just type it out.
I liked the Office type vibe it had, like the dry humor and what not. But it almost did feel like a 2 hour Office with just a more incompetent boss and more vulgarity.
The idea is solid, and it is well executed by Daz, but I can't help but notice that it suffers from what I like to call the "Daz Syndrome", in that it's seems like it overstays it's welcome by just a little bit. IE, it dragged a bit, especially in the middle. I just think with a few cuts of unnecessary stuff, the script is much, much, much more fresh.
I did laugh a couple times, especially when Jack, Simon and Sigler are trying to work the DVD player near the end. That was good.
There were a good amount of grammatical errors, which I'm sure is the product of writing in large chunks at one time.
Overall, I liked it more than 19th Road, and is worth a read from everyone.
3.8/5
I liked the Office type vibe it had, like the dry humor and what not. But it almost did feel like a 2 hour Office with just a more incompetent boss and more vulgarity.
The idea is solid, and it is well executed by Daz, but I can't help but notice that it suffers from what I like to call the "Daz Syndrome", in that it's seems like it overstays it's welcome by just a little bit. IE, it dragged a bit, especially in the middle. I just think with a few cuts of unnecessary stuff, the script is much, much, much more fresh.
I did laugh a couple times, especially when Jack, Simon and Sigler are trying to work the DVD player near the end. That was good.
There were a good amount of grammatical errors, which I'm sure is the product of writing in large chunks at one time.
Overall, I liked it more than 19th Road, and is worth a read from everyone.
3.8/5
